急!帮我检查一下这个作文有什么错误写出的作文,不知道有多少错误~帮忙改一下~最好是英语高手,谢谢!做好帮我把改完的文章发出来,谢谢. About me/I（忘了用哪个了,好像是me吧）

急!帮我检查一下这个作文有什么错误写出的作文,不知道有多少错误~帮忙改一下~最好是英语高手,谢谢!做好帮我把改完的文章发出来,谢谢. About me/I（忘了用哪个了,好像是me吧）
急!帮我检查一下这个作文有什么错误
写出的作文,不知道有多少错误~帮忙改一下~最好是英语高手,谢谢!做好帮我把改完的文章发出来,谢谢.
About me/I（忘了用哪个了,好像是me吧）
I am ***（姓名不便透漏）.I was born on 1996.I like playing computer games best.Because they are really cool.I also like playing basketball,it is so exciting but alittle dangerous.My favorite singer,movie actor and magician is Jay Chou(杰伦~).Look!this is his picture(拿照片).how cool is he!
This is my 10-year-old picture.In it,I was climb mountain.This is a beautiful mountain called “Cui Yan(这个可以不翻译)”It is alittle far away from JinZhou（锦州）.So I rode bike there and it took me 2 hours to go there.I am very happy (那时).
1L，没有中文句子啊！
看下面的！明天要！
About me/I（忘了用哪个了，好像是me吧）
I am ***（姓名不便透漏）。I was born on 1996.I like playing computer games best.Because they are really cool.I also like playing basketball,it is so exciting but alittle dangerous.My favorite singer,movie actor and magician is Jay Chou(杰伦~).Look!this is his picture(拿照片).how cool is he!
This is my 10-year-old picture.In it,I was climb mountain.This is a beautiful mountain called “Cui Yan(这个可以不翻译)”It is alittle far away from JinZhou（锦州）。So I rode bike there and it took me 2 hours to go there.I am very happy (那时)。

急!帮我检查一下这个作文有什么错误写出的作文,不知道有多少错误~帮忙改一下~最好是英语高手,谢谢!做好帮我把改完的文章发出来,谢谢. About me/I（忘了用哪个了,好像是me吧）
About me/I（随便哪个都可以）
I am ***.I was born on （应该用in）1996.I like playing computer games best,because they are really cool.I also like playing basketball,it is very exciting but a little dangerous.My favorite singeris Jay Chou(杰伦~).Look!this is his picture(拿照片).how cool is he（改成he is）!
This is my 10-year-old picture.（改成Here are some pictures of me.更好些吧）Look at thispicture,I was climbing redients mountain.This is a beautiful mountain called “Cui Yan(这个可以不翻译)”It is a little far away（away删去） from JinZhou（锦州）.So I rode bike there （改成Iwent there by bike）and it took me 2 hours .I am very happy then(那时).

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中文翻译是： 我出生在1996.我最喜欢玩电脑游戏.因为他们真的cool.I也想打篮球，就这样令人兴奋的，但一点 dangerous.我最喜爱的歌手，电影演员和魔术师是周杰伦（杰伦〜 ） 。瞧！这是他的照片（拿照片） 。如何冷静是他！
这是我10岁picture.In它，我是爬mountain.This是一个美丽的山区被称为“崔压嗯（这个可以不翻译） ”这是一点远离锦州（锦...

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中文翻译是： 我出生在1996.我最喜欢玩电脑游戏.因为他们真的cool.I也想打篮球，就这样令人兴奋的，但一点 dangerous.我最喜爱的歌手，电影演员和魔术师是周杰伦（杰伦〜 ） 。瞧！这是他的照片（拿照片） 。如何冷静是他！
这是我10岁picture.In它，我是爬mountain.This是一个美丽的山区被称为“崔压嗯（这个可以不翻译） ”这是一点远离锦州（锦州） 。所以，我骑自行车有和我花了2个小时去那.我很高兴
你翻译中文后把语句修改得通顺就行！！

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英文句子与中文句子不一样

1.how cool he is!用翻了。
2.i was climbing mountain
3.i was very happy。
大概是这样，你应该学得不错，只是粗心罢了。我比你大一岁哦