谁来帮我修改下英语的值日报告(初一的)..谢100主要是纠正语法问题还有内容Good morning everyone ,I'm on duty today. Today is X day ,the weather is hot. Oh, What's your hobby? Um..i'm very much in music and what's food do y

谁来帮我修改下英语的值日报告(初一的)..谢100主要是纠正语法问题还有内容Good morning everyone ,I'm on duty today. Today is X day ,the weather is hot. Oh, What's your hobby? Um..i'm very much in music and what's food do y
谁来帮我修改下英语的值日报告(初一的)..谢100
主要是纠正语法问题还有内容
Good morning everyone ,I'm on duty today. Today is X day ,the weather is hot.
Oh, What's your hobby? Um..i'm very much in music
and what's food do you like? for me ,Ilike dessert,for example ice cream lemon pie ,iced tea.
next,what do you want to be ? i want to be an editor or hostess,Because i like chinese i want to work for TV station.
Just now ,I asked my friends baout animals. Some like tigers.
comelikebifds.But most of them like monkeys and pandas.Monkey are running and jumping all the time.They like eating nuts bananas,pearsand many other things.Pandas sitting there playing with their bady pandas or eating the food,Theyare friendly to children
last ,thank for listening to my dutu report,i hope you have a good day today.

谁来帮我修改下英语的值日报告(初一的)..谢100主要是纠正语法问题还有内容Good morning everyone ,I'm on duty today. Today is X day ,the weather is hot. Oh, What's your hobby? Um..i'm very much in music and what's food do y
Good morning everyone ,I'm on duty today.Today is X day ,the weather is hot.
Today I have several questions for you.First of all,What's your hobby?Um..I'm very much interested in music./I like music very much.
Secondly,what's your favourite food?/What kind of food do you like best?As is for me ,I like dessert most,such as,ice cream lemon pie ,iced tea.
Thirdly,what do you want to be in the future?I want to be an editor or a hostess.It is because I like Chinese and I want to have ajob in a TV station.
Besides,I asked my friends something about animals just now.The answers are various.Some like tigers.while others like birds.But most of them like monkeys and pandas.Monkeys are running and jumping all the time.They like eating nuts ,bananas,pears and many other things.Pandas are usually sitting there ,playing with their bady pandas or eating the food.They are friendly with children.
Finally/At last,thank you all （或用Many thanks）for listening to my duty report,I hope you have a good day today.
OK!Done.句式表达上有一些chinglish,少量拼写错误,总体来说还不错.经过修改,现在没问题了.
PS:英文写作和口语表达中尽量使用简单常见的句式,避免汉语思维直接翻译成英语.
1.hostess表示电视节目主持人,anchorwoman指的是新闻类节目播音员.你自己选.
另外hostess 常见意义为“女主人”,air hostess 空姐.
2.dessert 指（饭后）甜食（如馅饼、果馅饼、冰激凌等）,当然像一些水果、甜酒之类的也可以作为甜食用于餐后.