求精通英语的高手帮忙修改下文章里的语法错误、一篇很简单的文章、、、在线等、、谢谢饿In our life, there are many difficult things, but we have to finish them. Someone will give up, but someone will finish them. I

求精通英语的高手帮忙修改下文章里的语法错误、一篇很简单的文章、、、在线等、、谢谢饿In our life, there are many difficult things, but we have to finish them. Someone will give up, but someone will finish them. I
求精通英语的高手帮忙修改下文章里的语法错误、一篇很简单的文章、、、在线等、、谢谢饿
In our life, there are many difficult things, but we have to finish them. Someone will give up, but someone will finish them. It depend on whether you have a strong determination. In my life, there are many difficult things, but I will finish them.
\x05Painting is the hardest thing for me but I like to paint. In China, I am a art students, I studied painting for three years. My teacher said I can not draw very well because my eyes. I am a color weakness, but this is not serious.
\x05I am not a color-blindness, I just can not distinguish between similar colors.
I believe I can draw well. I did a lot of practice to become familiar with color and pasted color name on the bottle. Finally I passed the professional examination.
\x05Painting is the hardest thing for me. I believe I can draw well and I like to draw a picture. I believe if I do a lot of practice, I will draw. Now, I can not become a painter, but I am successful.
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求精通英语的高手帮忙修改下文章里的语法错误、一篇很简单的文章、、、在线等、、谢谢饿In our life, there are many difficult things, but we have to finish them. Someone will give up, but someone will finish them. I
depend改为depends\第四行a改为an、第五行studied前加have\第五行because后加of

In our life, there are many difficulties, but we have to finish them. Someone will give up, but someone willovercom them. It depends on whether you have a strong will. In my life, there are many dif...

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In our life, there are many difficulties, but we have to finish them. Someone will give up, but someone willovercom them. It depends on whether you have a strong will. In my life, there are many difficult things, but I will overcome them.
Painting is the hardest thing for me, but I like painting. In China, I am an art student, I have studied painting for three years. My teacher said I can not draw very well because my eyesight. I am a color weakness, but this is not serious.
I am not a color-blindness, I just can not distinguish between similar colors.
I believe I can draw well. I did a lot of practice to become familiar with colors and pasted color name on the bottle. Finally I passed the professional examination.
Painting is the hardest thing for me. I believe I can draw well and I like drawing pictures. I believe if I do a lot of practice, I will draw quite well. Now, I can not become a painter, but I am successful person.
大致修改了一下，希望能帮到你! 觉得有问题的话可以继续追问，呵呵

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第一句“but"去掉 "depend"加“s" 第二段 "a”改成“an"
"students"改成“student" "can"改成 “could" "because"后加"of"
第二...

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第一句“but"去掉 "depend"加“s" 第二段 "a”改成“an"
"students"改成“student" "can"改成 “could" "because"后加"of"
第二段在"studied"前加"have"
"between"改成“among" "name"加"s"
最后一句中的“I will draw " 改成“I can draw"

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depend 但成单三加s students 去掉s studied前加have because后加of between去掉 最后一行if去掉