求精通英语的高手修改文章、、很简单、、修改下语法错误就可以了、、在线等、、谢谢了.I like delicious food,so I often go to a restaurant for dinner.I think food is a pleasure to enjoy.Delicious food will make peopl

求精通英语的高手修改文章、、很简单、、修改下语法错误就可以了、、在线等、、谢谢了.I like delicious food,so I often go to a restaurant for dinner.I think food is a pleasure to enjoy.Delicious food will make peopl
求精通英语的高手修改文章、、很简单、、修改下语法错误就可以了、、在线等、、谢谢了.
I like delicious food,so I often go to a restaurant for dinner.I think food is a pleasure to enjoy.Delicious food will make people happy,so I mad because of the delicious food.So I often do in the restaurant crazy things.
In different restaurants have different delicious food.I like Japanese food,so I often go to Japan,a restaurant for dinner.Once in the Japanese restaurant for dinner,because the sushi so delicious,so I ate a lot.So I did not checkout enough money so I called my friend to pay for me.
I also like to try to create food.Once,I ate lunch in the hotel,there are two types of food,very tasty.So I want to mix them together,as will be more delicious.The results on the contrary,become particularly unpalatable.
I can get crazy for food in a restaurant.I really like good food.Even though I'm full,I will continue to eat delicious food.Perhaps you may think it's crazy.

求精通英语的高手修改文章、、很简单、、修改下语法错误就可以了、、在线等、、谢谢了.I like delicious food,so I often go to a restaurant for dinner.I think food is a pleasure to enjoy.Delicious food will make peopl
同学,我想把你这篇文章全面的动一下好不?可以告诉一下我,那个题材不?

so I （become) mad （mad是形容词，缺少系动词）
So I often do in the restaurant crazy things.变为So I often do crazy things in the restaurant
In different restaurants have different delicious food变为There are...

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so I （become) mad （mad是形容词，缺少系动词）
So I often do in the restaurant crazy things.变为So I often do crazy things in the restaurant
In different restaurants have different delicious food变为There are different delicious foodIn different restaurants
so I often go to Japan, a restaurant for dinner变为so I often go to a Japanese restaurant for dinner， because the sushi so delicious so I ate a lot变为Once in the Japanese restaurant for dinner ，I ate a lot because the sushi is so delicious （because和so不能同时使用；delicious是形容词前面要有be动词等系动词）
So I did not checkout enough money so I called my friend to pay for me.不要用两个so，把第一个去掉
I also like to try to create food. 变为I also like trying to creat food.
顺便说一下，你的这篇文章很多都是中国式英语，要加以修改啊

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