英语：请问以下的英语短文是否有语法问题.我要用来应付明天的初中保送高中的保送生面试的自我介绍.请各位在帮忙查看语法是否有问题的同事,顺便帮我看一下在礼法上是否有问题.====Good

英语：请问以下的英语短文是否有语法问题.我要用来应付明天的初中保送高中的保送生面试的自我介绍.请各位在帮忙查看语法是否有问题的同事,顺便帮我看一下在礼法上是否有问题.====Good
英语：请问以下的英语短文是否有语法问题.
我要用来应付明天的初中保送高中的保送生面试的自我介绍.请各位在帮忙查看语法是否有问题的同事,顺便帮我看一下在礼法上是否有问题.
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Good morning,my dear teachers.
I feel happy and I think I'm lucky for having a chance to study in No.15 Senior High School.Please let me introduce myself.My name is XXX and I'm from XXXX Middle School.I‘m easygoing as well as outgoing.I also like English and music.However,I'm poor at spoken English and listenning【listenning是想表达英语听力,请问这样可以么?】.I might make mistakes in my words after,please forgive me.
That's all.Thank you for your listenning.

英语：请问以下的英语短文是否有语法问题.我要用来应付明天的初中保送高中的保送生面试的自我介绍.请各位在帮忙查看语法是否有问题的同事,顺便帮我看一下在礼法上是否有问题.====Good
根据你写的,我做了些修改：
Good morning, all my teachers/Good morning to all of my teachers.
I am XXX and come from XXXX Middle School. I feel very happy, fortunate, and honored to have the opportunity to become a student at No.15 Senior High School. As a person, I‘m easygoing and outgoing. I also enjoy music. Although English is my favorite subject, I'm still poor at spoken English as well as listenning comprehension. Please forgive me if I have made any mistakes in mybrief introduction of myself. Thank you all for your patience.

希望对你有帮助.

Good morning, all dear teachers.
I am very hornored to have this chance to study in No.15 Senior High School. Please let me introduce myself in short. My name is XXX and I'm from XXXX Middle Schoo...

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Good morning, all dear teachers.
I am very hornored to have this chance to study in No.15 Senior High School. Please let me introduce myself in short. My name is XXX and I'm from XXXX Middle School. I‘m easygoing as well as outgoing. My hobbies is English and music. However, I'm not so good at speaking English and listenning. I really appreciate this opportunity, and I am ready for it.

Thanks for all your time.

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listenning改成Listening
Please let me introduce myself briefly
I might make mistakes in my words after？？

呃呃呃，
没有语法上的错误，写的还不错。
不过有一个小错问listenning多了一个n，这里是不用双写的哦~
望楼主采纳~~~

Good morning, dear teachers.
I feel happy and lucky for having a chance to study in No.15 Senior High School. Please let me introduce myself. My name is XXX and I'm from XXXX Middle School. I‘m ea...

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Good morning, dear teachers.
I feel happy and lucky for having a chance to study in No.15 Senior High School. Please let me introduce myself. My name is XXX and I'm from XXXX Middle School. I‘m easygoing as well as outgoing. I like music so I often play the guitar. I like English very much. However, I'm poor at spoken English and listenning【listenning这样可以么】. So I might make mistakes in my speaking , please excuse me.....这样写后面应该还有内容。
That's all.Thank you for your listenning.

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开头不要feel happy ，用I'm so glad to have an opportunity to study