托福作文求助这样的作文几分?My perspective of whether should the hight schools give a group of students the same mark is definite, they should not. Education, a integral and significant filed of human society ,also have the divergence

托福作文求助这样的作文几分?My perspective of whether should the hight schools give a group of students the same mark is definite, they should not. Education, a integral and significant filed of human society ,also have the divergence
托福作文求助这样的作文几分?
My perspective of whether should the hight schools give a group of students the same mark is definite, they should not.
Education, a integral and significant filed of human society ,also have the divergence of views among lots of educator . The group work is a common activity in today's college study, and should all of the student in the group get a same mark? I have already clarified my standpoint, and now there are a couple of reasons.
For starters, If all the students in a group get the same mark , a phenomenon that some of the student in the group might not work hard would happen, even some of the students in the group are just waiting for a A. This a not fair ,particularly to the students who worked hard. And if we give the different marks by judging each student's effort, It may be a better way.
Besides, By giving the different mark, students will understand an principle that "Achievement cost perspiration ." And this motto not only works in study ,but also works in the whole life. So by giving the different mark, It's beneficial for students to pursue a better future.
What's more, The motive of team work is not let someone rest and others work hard, the real motive is improving the efficiency and create coordinating capability. To achieve this target we should not give all the students the same mark.
In addition, someone may say"giving the same mark made a team look like a team". We can not deny this advantage, and giving the different mark also have it's drawbacks . both these two ways have their advantages and drawbacks , but concerning it in a provident way and think the issue deeply, It is safely to say that giving the different mark is a better way.
So, all in all, The high schools and universities should give students different marks, even thought they are in a same group.

托福作文求助这样的作文几分?My perspective of whether should the hight schools give a group of students the same mark is definite, they should not. Education, a integral and significant filed of human society ,also have the divergence
小错误比较多 比如应是Achievement costS perspiration
你语法不扎实
词还不错,背得比我多
分数应是3.5-4.5