英语小小作文挑错~The NIRVANAI dont't know why so many people like them very.Or maybe i just can't enjoy their music...One of my friend told me that he love this band very much.Then I seach sth about them and I found many people love their mus

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英语小小作文挑错~TheNIRVANAIdont''tknowwhysomanypeoplelikethemvery.Ormaybeijustcan''tenjoytheirmusic...Oneofmy

英语小小作文挑错~The NIRVANAI dont't know why so many people like them very.Or maybe i just can't enjoy their music...One of my friend told me that he love this band very much.Then I seach sth about them and I found many people love their mus
I dont't know why so many people like them very.
首先don't写错了,very也不能放在句尾,应该去掉
Or maybe i just can't enjoy their music...
I大写,其他没错,但觉得不太通顺,如果你想说"或许我只是不懂得欣赏他们的音乐",你可以说maybe I don't know how to appreciate their music 更好一些
One of my friend told me that he love this band very much.
应该是one of my friends,told为过去式,后面时态一致应为loved
Then I seach sth about them and I found many people love their music!
搜索是search 不是seach,整句话时态都不清楚,前面search是一般现在时,后面found是过去式,再后面love又为现在时,应统一.
So I want to know why.
这句对了
I listened some songs of them tonight.
应该是listened to
I try to find some songs I like!
应该是tried
But I couldn't .To be honest,I don't like that kind of music very much.
To be honest?你是不是想说"说句实话",那应该表达为 In fact,后面用very much不妥,最好说I don't like that kind of music at all,我一点也不喜欢那种音乐.
They're not sounds bad but I just don't like.
这里错了,应该是they don't sound bad,而不应该用被动
Maybe I'm opinionated because I just heard a few songs of them.
也许我自以为是因为我只听了一点,heard应该改成listened to,一点点应该是few而不是a few.
Maybe I'm not have a right of comment because I nearly don't understand music.
应该是I don't have a right comment,后面对了
I'll listen more music of them and then maybe I'll like their music because of knowing them.
listen后面加to,后面没有语法错误
Do not make a comment too fast before you know it,I think.
没错
我觉得你的英语表达能力应该注意训练啊,虽然有些看起来是对的,但是读起来很不通顺,应该避免写成中国式英语,希望你继续努力.

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I dont't know why so many people like them very (much).
One of my friend(改为friends)told me that he love(d) this band very much.Then I seach sth about them and I found (that)many people love their music! I want to know why. "I listened some songs of them tonight."感觉改为I listened some of their songs 好点~ 应该是They don't sounds bad but I just don't like.“Maybe I'm not have a right of comment because I nearly don't understand music. ”应改为“maybe I don't have the right to comment because i hardly understand music" " I'll listen more music of them and then maybe I'll like their music because of knowing them. "感觉变成"i'll try to listen to their music more often and then probably i'll change my mind."最后一句最好改成"don't make a comment so fast before you truly know it

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,or maybe i just can't enjoy their music（逗号，小写o）
One of my friend told me that he love this band very much. （friends)
Then I searched something about them and I found many people love their music!(searched,something要写全)
So I wanted to know why.过去时
I tried to find some songs I like!过去时
They are not unpleasant to hear but I just don't like. (sounds bad是一个主意听起来不好）
Maybe I don't have the right to comment because I nearly don't understand the music.(don't,the right, to,the指音乐这门艺术要加the)

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I don't know why so many people like this band(你没有先得词或后来补充就说them，不知道你说的是谁呀)very much,perhaps just I don't like it...
One of my friends told me that he loves this band very much, so I searched the things about them, then I found that there are many people like this band too.I want to know why.I listened some their songs tonight, and I tried to find someone I like. But I couldn't. To be honest, I really don't like this kind of music. Maybe The songs are good,just it's not my style.Probably,I'm opinionated and I just heard a few their songs to make my comment wrong (because I nearly don't understand music不知道这是什么意思，你刚说你不喜欢这种风格一会又说你不懂音乐logic problems).I'll listen more their songs to let me know them better, maybe then I will like their songs.
Do not make comments too soon before you know about it, I think.
以上纯属个人浅见.

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I don't know why so many people like them or maybe i just can't enjoy their music...
One of my friend told me that he loved this band very much. Then I search somthing about them, and I found man...

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I don't know why so many people like them or maybe i just can't enjoy their music...
One of my friend told me that he loved this band very much. Then I search somthing about them, and I found many people love their music too. I want to know why. I listened to some of their songs tonight. I tried to find the songs that I like, but I couldn't . To be honest, I don't like this kind of music very much. They're not sounds bad, but I just don't like them. Maybe I'm opinionated because I just heard a few songs of them. Maybe I'm not having a right of comment because I nearly don't even understand music. I'll listen more of this kind the music, maybe I'll like their music by knowing them.
I think people do not make comment too eary before you know it.

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