这封英文的信件表达上有错误吗?中文意思---非常高兴收到你的邮件,本来我还一直担心是否将邮件地址写错,致使一直没有收到你的回复,现在想想,这些顾虑好象都是多余的.很抱歉这封邮件让

这封英文的信件表达上有错误吗?中文意思---非常高兴收到你的邮件,本来我还一直担心是否将邮件地址写错,致使一直没有收到你的回复,现在想想,这些顾虑好象都是多余的.很抱歉这封邮件让
这封英文的信件表达上有错误吗?
中文意思---非常高兴收到你的邮件,本来我还一直担心是否将邮件地址写错,致使一直没有收到你的回复,现在想想,这些顾虑好象都是多余的.很抱歉这封邮件让你等了这么长的时间,因为我的英语水平不好,很担心邮寄给你的信件有太多错误,导致你不能了解我想要表达的意思.你最近过的好吗?很想知道你每天的生活是如何度过的.空闲的时候会去做什么.希望你愿意让我与你一起分享.上次相聚的时间太短,有很多安排还没去做你就已经离开中国了.我还记得你说想去唱歌,但是...如果知道你会这么快离开中国,当时就该陪你去的.真的太遗憾了!你还记得我说的这个单词吗?studio．只要想起这件事情,就忍不住想笑．还记得上次我们的约定吗?一个关于两年后的约定．我的英文水平和你的中文水平要做评估的,如果你懒惰我就会超过你的．我很希望能来美国看看你的家人,但是办理签证却很麻烦,对于用什么方式办理签证最好,如果你知道请给我你的建议．
英文----
Very glad to receive your mail.Actually I have been still afraid all the time whether to wrongly write the address the reply teeter paper caused and never received you by oneself,think about it now,it seems that the worry is a bit surplus.I am sorry this mail keeps you wait for such a long time,because my English level is not good,the letter worrying posting to you very much has too many mistakes,be unable to understand the meaning that I want to express while causing you.
 What you crossed recently,OK?Would like to know how your every day's life was spent.Will do something when being idle.Hope you would like to let me share together with you. The time when met last time is too short,a lot of arrangements have not worked as you to leave China yet. I also remember you say that want to sing,but ...If know you will leave China so quickly,should accompany you to go at that time.Really too sorry!
Do you also remember this word that I speak?{ studio} So long as remember this thing,can't help wanting to smile. Remember our agreement of last time?One is about agreement two years later.My English level and your Chinese level should be assessed,I will exceed you if you are lazy.
 I hope to come to U.S.A.to see your family very much,but it is very troublesome to ask for visa,as to the thing that ask for visa best in some ways,I do not know,if you know that please leave your suggestion on me.

这封英文的信件表达上有错误吗?中文意思---非常高兴收到你的邮件,本来我还一直担心是否将邮件地址写错,致使一直没有收到你的回复,现在想想,这些顾虑好象都是多余的.很抱歉这封邮件让
有好多句子缺少主语
my English level is not good 介意改成my english is not very well
What you crossed recently,OK?Would like to know how your every day's life was spent.Will do something when being idle我认为这句有点问题,how about you these days?i would like to know your daily life.what will you do when you are free
Remember our agreement of last time去掉of

Actually I have been still afraid all the time 错
I am sorry this mail keeps you wait 错
这是自己查字典 写的啊？ 中国式英语
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