希望懂英语人士帮帮忙,帮我改下作文.Dear Sir or Madam,Moved by the noble cause of Preject Hope and encouraged by what has been achieved so far,I would like to contribute my bit to the preject by offering financial aid to medical service

希望懂英语人士帮帮忙,帮我改下作文.Dear Sir or Madam,Moved by the noble cause of Preject Hope and encouraged by what has been achieved so far,I would like to contribute my bit to the preject by offering financial aid to medical service
希望懂英语人士帮帮忙,帮我改下作文.
Dear Sir or Madam,
Moved by the noble cause of Preject Hope and encouraged by what has been achieved so far,I would like to contribute my bit to the preject by offering financial aid to medical services in a remote area of your provice.
I would be much grateful if you could help me seek out a institution that providing the free use of medical services for people of the remote area.My will plan is to give it economic support every year.I would like to remit my donation directly to a bank account opened by this institution at the local area.
Yours sincerely,
Li ming
亲爱的先生或女士,
希望工程这项高尚的事业感动了我,同时这项工程迄今所取的成就也鼓舞了我.因此,我想通过给贵省偏远地区的医疗服务提供经济帮助,来为希望工程贡献我微薄之力.
如果你能帮我寻找一个为贫苦地区的人们提供免费医疗服务的机构,本人将计划每年给予它经济支持.我希望把捐款直接汇给这个机构当地银行账户里.
您真诚的,
李明

希望懂英语人士帮帮忙,帮我改下作文.Dear Sir or Madam,Moved by the noble cause of Preject Hope and encouraged by what has been achieved so far,I would like to contribute my bit to the preject by offering financial aid to medical service
Dear Sir or Madam,
Moved by the noble cause of Preject(Project) Hope and encouraged by what has been achieved so far, I would like to contribute my bit to the preject (project) by offering financial aid to (加 the) medical services in (a remote area 改为 the remote areas) of your provice (province).
I would be (much 改为 most) grateful if you could help me (加 to) seek out (a 要改为 an) institution that providing the free use of medical services for people of the remote area(s). My will plan is to give it economic support every year. I would like to remit my donation directly to a bank account opened by this institution (at改为 in) the local area.
Yours sincerely,
Li (Ming 名字要大写)
信写的甚好,只是一些少错,已替你更正了,而打错了的字也一起改好了.要注意的是,若果不是手写,标点後要留个空格.希望会满意.