求高手帮我改下英语作文 有什么不足的或者错误指点下,帮我改改求大侠帮帮忙 我的作文：MY TEACHERWhen I was in childhood,in many people's eyes,I was a bad boy who always didn't abide by school's regulars,usually appea

求高手帮我改下英语作文 有什么不足的或者错误指点下,帮我改改求大侠帮帮忙 我的作文：MY TEACHERWhen I was in childhood,in many people's eyes,I was a bad boy who always didn't abide by school's regulars,usually appea
求高手帮我改下英语作文 有什么不足的或者错误指点下,帮我改改
求大侠帮帮忙 我的作文：MY TEACHER
When I was in childhood,in many people's eyes,I was a bad boy who always didn't abide by school's regulars,usually appealed to force or assassinated their characters if somebody didn't obey with what I said
I was studying in school A affiliated to school B where I meet the first and important teacher---Miss Chen who was great to my appetite as a teacher in my mind and I was in awe of. When she meet us at the first time,she said:"From now on, I will be your president,If you have any problems in your living or studying,I will help you and try to put across how to solve them."and at the same time,she appeal to us that we must aid one another and develop our morally intellectually phsycally and esthetically.
Although I had many faults Miss Chen didn't think I was so bad .She encouraged me and let me undertake the monitor of our class.From that day,I was getting around to thinking about what I must do and what I shouldn't do.Eventually,I become a good boy and all out to study when the examination was coming around.At last,I got all but the greatest achievement in my class.
Thank you!Miss Chen!

求高手帮我改下英语作文 有什么不足的或者错误指点下,帮我改改求大侠帮帮忙 我的作文：MY TEACHERWhen I was in childhood,in many people's eyes,I was a bad boy who always didn't abide by school's regulars,usually appea
您的英语作文中存在明显的汉语思维,另外还存在一些语法错误,现帮助您改正如下：
MY TEACHER
When I was a child,I was a bad boy who have always disobeyed the school rules in my school.I threatened most of my schoolmates with beating them on condition that they failed to act in my way.
After moving to a new school,I met the most important person in my life---Miss Chen,who succeed in teaching me how to be a good student and wining my complete respects.
When she met us in classroom at the first time,she told all of us:"From now on,I would like to be your guide to help solve any problems occured in both your life and your studying".at the same time,she had also promised us that she would help improve our performance in terms of morality,intelligence,physical work capacity and arts.
Miss Chen never brought any negative criticism to me,instead,She had always encouraged me to behave better and appointed me as the capital of our class,which successfully made me get around to thinking about what I should do and what I shouldn't do.
Eventually,I become a boy who keep studying hard all day.on account of Miss Chen's pure-hearted help,at last,I obtained the ideal scores in my class.
Thank you!Miss Chen!