求英语高手,帮我改下考研英语小作文,受累!如果有语法错误,麻烦您帮我指出来,（这是12年英语2的小作文）Directions:Suppose you have found something wrong with the electronic dictionary that you brought from an onli

求英语高手,帮我改下考研英语小作文,受累!如果有语法错误,麻烦您帮我指出来,（这是12年英语2的小作文）Directions:Suppose you have found something wrong with the electronic dictionary that you brought from an onli
求英语高手,帮我改下考研英语小作文,受累!
如果有语法错误,麻烦您帮我指出来,（这是12年英语2的小作文）
Directions:
Suppose you have found something wrong with the electronic dictionary that you brought from an online store the other day.Write an email to the customer service center to
1.make a complaint ,and
2.demand a prompt solution
Dear sir or madam,
I am a customer who regularly buy something from your online store,I am completely disappointed to find that the service you provide is far from satisfactory.
I am referring to this thing that I just buy an electronic dictionary from your online store in last week,but there are some problems with it.Firstly,the dictionary is broken when I receive it .Secondly ,the battery needs charging after only two hours of use.
Therefore,something must be done to solve the problems,because it bring me much trouble in my study.You can either compensate me at a reasonable price or alternatively send me a new machine by express mail.Lastly,please tell me which solution you prefer at you earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

求英语高手,帮我改下考研英语小作文,受累!如果有语法错误,麻烦您帮我指出来,（这是12年英语2的小作文）Directions:Suppose you have found something wrong with the electronic dictionary that you brought from an onli
far from satisfactory 最好用satisfaction更地道
I just buy这里要用过去时,因为有just 用bought
in last week去掉in,不然太中国了哦
when I receive it中,你收到应该是过去的动作,应用received
solve the problems,because it bring 这句中,前面是problems但是后面却用it就不好了哦,应用they保持前后关系协调
剩下的都很好,广外高翻研究生,当年也是这样熬过来的,加油!

作为一个过来人，我给您提几条参考建议： 首先，你要搞清自己想要读研的目的何在。多数人都认为其目的是找一份好的工作，既然如此，若本科毕业能够找到理想的工作，可以考虑先工作几年，等想充电的时候再读研也不迟。如暂时没找到合适的工作，不妨考虑先读研。 其次，你要考虑好自己的实力，毕竟考研和找工作会有些冲突。如果认为自己有足够的实力，不妨作一个两手准备，在考研的同时兼顾找工作。 最后，我想家庭的经济势力也是...

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作为一个过来人，我给您提几条参考建议： 首先，你要搞清自己想要读研的目的何在。多数人都认为其目的是找一份好的工作，既然如此，若本科毕业能够找到理想的工作，可以考虑先工作几年，等想充电的时候再读研也不迟。如暂时没找到合适的工作，不妨考虑先读研。 其次，你要考虑好自己的实力，毕竟考研和找工作会有些冲突。如果认为自己有足够的实力，不妨作一个两手准备，在考研的同时兼顾找工作。 最后，我想家庭的经济势力也是自己应该考虑的一个方面。如果经济状况不允许，还是先工作较好。 希望以上几条建议能够给您以帮助

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