检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误A time when you were mean- the life is unvorhersehbar like weather sometime it's lovely day sometime it's worsely day like when you are young you are innocent and pure untill yougrow up you become a mea

检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误A time when you were mean- the life is unvorhersehbar like weather sometime it's lovely day sometime it's worsely day like when you are young you are innocent and pure untill yougrow up you become a mea
检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误
A time when you were mean- the life is unvorhersehbar like weather sometime it's lovely day sometime it's worsely day like when you are young you are innocent and pure untill yougrow up you become a mean person maybe it;s have herald maybe it's The rain come suddenly dosen't have any herald yesterday the sky look lovely at that time I am a little girl I believe anything All the things that adults say and I believe All the things that world tell mi untill i'm grow up the pressure comeform pople around mi the Bad behavior comeform the news the sad feeling comeform somebody hate mi a time when i were mean when all above that things come to mi and i curse someone who make mi unhappy like the queen form Snow White dose i evil like the sister form Cinderella dose and mean like witch form mermaid dose till someday some good happen to mi or something punishment come to mi or i be strong and save my self all thing hardly change in a good way A time when you were mean when all bad thing come to you maybe you will become a mean person but if you are strong enough to face all bed thing you will become a kind person again like the weather after rainy day it's sunnday

检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误A time when you were mean- the life is unvorhersehbar like weather sometime it's lovely day sometime it's worsely day like when you are young you are innocent and pure untill yougrow up you become a mea
One time when you recall your memories- the life is unpredictable like weather. Sometime it's good and sometime it's bad, just like when you are young you are innocent and pure untill you grow up. You become a mean person. maybe it's the herald maybe it's The rain come suddenly that haven't any herald. Yesterday the sky looked lovely. When I am still a little girl. I believe everything. All the things that adults say I believe. I believe all the things that world tell me untill I have grown up. The pressure come from pople around me. The Bad behavior come from the news. The sad feeling come from somebody who hate me. At the time when I recalled all above things come to me. I curse someone who make me unhappy like the queen from the story of Snow White. Am I an evil like the sister from Cinderella ? Am I so mean like the witch from Mermaid? I stop till something good happened to me or punishment come to me one day or I become strong and save myself. All thing hardly changes in a good way .At a time when you think all bad thing come to you, maybe you will become a mean person but if you are strong enough to face all bad thing, you will become a kind person again like the weather after rainy day. it's sunny.