检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误I will spend my summer holiday in Beijing.It is the capital city of china.There are a lot of famous and interesting places.The most famous place is the great wall.It is very beautiful.I want to climb up

检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误I will spend my summer holiday in Beijing.It is the capital city of china.There are a lot of famous and interesting places.The most famous place is the great wall.It is very beautiful.I want to climb up
检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误
I will spend my summer holiday in Beijing.It is the capital city of china.There are a lot of famous and interesting places.The most famous place is the great wall.It is very beautiful.I want to climb up to it first.Then I will visit the Forbidden City.I also want to visit Bei Hai park.If the is clear I will climb up to baita and see the whole park.
I will stay there for two days.I think it would be a wonderful holiday

检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误I will spend my summer holiday in Beijing.It is the capital city of china.There are a lot of famous and interesting places.The most famous place is the great wall.It is very beautiful.I want to climb up
1.It is the capital city of China.
China c要大写
2.I want to climb up it firstly.或者用at first.去掉to
3.Then I will visit the Forbidden City.故宫的英语是 the Imperial Palace.
4.If the is clear I will climb up to baita and see the whole park.
掉了主语,If the（） is clear I will climb up to baita and see the whole park.
5.The most famous place is the great wall.
Great Wall G,W大写
6.I think it would be a wonderful holiday
would改成will
文章写的不错!

China ,大写
Great Wall，大写
I want to climb up to it first. 去掉to
Bei Hai Park ,大写p
If the weather is clear I will climb up to baita and see the whole park. 加上weather

没有单词拼写错误，不过有一处要改
if the is clear,应该为if it is clear.

1.Great Wall要大写
2.want to climb up to it first：its first
3.Bei Hai Park也是大写
4.it would be a wonderful holiday：would用will
5.If the is clear I will climb ···这个句子你没打全吧？the后面是什么？

the great wall - the Great Wall
climb up to it - climb up it
climb it
first. Then - first, then
Bei Hai park - Bei Hai Park
park. If - park and if
the is clear...

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the great wall - the Great Wall
climb up to it - climb up it
climb it
first. Then - first, then
Bei Hai park - Bei Hai Park
park. If - park and if
the is clear I will climb up to baita and see the whole park. - the weather is clear enough, I will climb up Bai Tower and see whole park.
it would be - it will be

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capital city 不要city capital 本来就是首都的意
思 加了City 反而多次一举
There are a lot of famous and interesting places
改成 There are many places of interest （名胜古迹）
I want to climb up to it first 改成...

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capital city 不要city capital 本来就是首都的意
思 加了City 反而多次一举
There are a lot of famous and interesting places
改成 There are many places of interest （名胜古迹）
I want to climb up to it first 改成
I want to climb it up 代词要放在动词和介词
中间
If the is clear 改为 If there is clean
clear是清晰的意思 clean 是干净
climb up to baita 去掉 to
I think it would be a wonderful holiday
不能用would would是过去将来时
这里应用 will 一般将来时

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