帮我看看演讲稿Hello everyoneToday ,I am glad to be able to stand here to give you this speech!My topic is "mother".Take the word 'family'.Strike out the 'm' for mother and the 'y' for youth--and all you have left is 'fail'.I were moved by this

帮我看看演讲稿Hello everyoneToday ,I am glad to be able to stand here to give you this speech!My topic is "mother".Take the word 'family'.Strike out the 'm' for mother and the 'y' for youth--and all you have left is 'fail'.I were moved by this
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Hello everyone
Today ,I am glad to be able to stand here to give you this speech!
My topic is "mother".
Take the word 'family'.Strike out the 'm' for mother and the 'y' for youth--and all you
have left is 'fail'.I were moved by this sentence.
When you are far away from your family and feel especially lonely,who will you think of?
When you are in trouble and do not know which way to choose,who will you think of?
Yes,it's mother that you will always think of.
In this holiday,My mother suffered greatly from a pain in the back.She did not do
housework.After I sending my sister to school.I bought groceries in the market.I washed the
vegetable.How cold the water it is!My fingers felt like blocks of ice.After lunch,I had to
wash the dishes and clean the floor.On the 3'clock,I took my mother to see the doctor.On the
way,I think of when I was a child,once I had a fever,my mother took me to see the doctor.She
was worried about me.Now I'm already a grown up.I am able to take care of my mother.
Mother gave me her love without asking for return,How deep mother love is!
课前5分钟演讲的
分类错了。不是要翻译，要帮我看看有没有语法毛病之类的问题。

帮我看看演讲稿Hello everyoneToday ,I am glad to be able to stand here to give you this speech!My topic is "mother".Take the word 'family'.Strike out the 'm' for mother and the 'y' for youth--and all you have left is 'fail'.I were moved by this
中国人讲话,常用"今天...",英语不那么常见,删掉好点.My topic is "mother"是不恰当的.可以改为
I am very glad to be here to give you this speech!
My topic is the "mother".
下面有一些修改,供参考,有些介词 in on,冠词 a,the
时态等我给改了好几个地方,你看一下是否恰当,可以想想其中区别
Now,let's consider the word 'family'.If we delete the letter 'm' for mother and the letter 'y' for youth--then all we have
left is 'fail'.I am moved by this sentence.
When you are far away from your family and feeling lonely seriously,who will you think of?
When you are in trouble and do not know which way to choose,who will you think of?
Yes,it's our mother who we will always think of.
On this holiday,My mother suffered a great pain on the back.She could't do any
housework.After I sending my sister to school,I bought groceries in the market.I washed the
vegetables.How cold the water it was!My fingers felt like blocks of ice.After lunch,I had to
wash the dishes and clean the floor.At 3'clock,I took my mother to see a doctor.On the
way,I remembered when I was a child,once I had a fever,my mother took me to see a doctor.She
was worried about me.Now I'm already a grown up.I am able to take care of my mother.
Mother gave me her love without asking for any return,How deep the mother's love is!

大家好今天，我是高兴能这里站立发表您这讲话! 我的题目是“母亲”。 采取词‘家庭’。 触击‘m’为母亲和‘y’为青年时期--并且所有您 离开是‘出故障’。我由这个句子移动。 您何时是很远从您的家庭并且感到特别孤独的，您将认为？ 您何时是在麻烦，并且不知道哪个方式选择，将您认为？ 是，它是您总将认为的母亲。 在这个假日，我的母亲在后面很大地遭受了痛苦。她没有做 家事。在派遣我的姐妹的I...

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大家好今天，我是高兴能这里站立发表您这讲话! 我的题目是“母亲”。 采取词‘家庭’。 触击‘m’为母亲和‘y’为青年时期--并且所有您 离开是‘出故障’。我由这个句子移动。 您何时是很远从您的家庭并且感到特别孤独的，您将认为？ 您何时是在麻烦，并且不知道哪个方式选择，将您认为？ 是，它是您总将认为的母亲。 在这个假日，我的母亲在后面很大地遭受了痛苦。她没有做 家事。在派遣我的姐妹的I到学校之后。我在市场上买了杂货。我洗涤了 菜。怎么寒冷水它是! 我的手指毛毡象冰块。 在午餐以后，我必须 洗盘子并且清洗地板。在3 '时钟，我采取我的母亲看医生。在 方式，我认为当我是孩子，一旦我有热病时，我的母亲采取我看医生。她 担心我。现在我已经是长大。我能照顾我的母亲。 母亲给了我她的爱，无需请求回归，多么深深母爱是!

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