求英语高手,帮我修改一下这篇英语作文.急.快,就今天My Summer HolidayEveryyear,Our summer holiday is in July and August.It’s a long time,and I can domany things during this time.The weather is very hot in the summer holiday,wemust

求英语高手,帮我修改一下这篇英语作文.急.快,就今天My Summer HolidayEveryyear,Our summer holiday is in July and August.It’s a long time,and I can domany things during this time.The weather is very hot in the summer holiday,wemust
求英语高手,帮我修改一下这篇英语作文.急.快,就今天
My Summer Holiday
Everyyear,Our summer holiday is in July and August.It’s a long time,and I can domany things during this time.The weather is very hot in the summer holiday,we
must wear T-shirt and shorts.This summer holiday I graduated from elementary
school.So I don’t have summer homework.It makes me feel very happy.But I
also enrolled an English
class.In English class,and I get to know some new friends.They and I get along very happy .In my spare time,I always listen
to music and read books,sometimes I ride my bicycle.Oh,My bicycle is very
good.Time passes very quickly,Summer has passed half.I finally have the opportunity to travel.I am
going to visit the Yellow
Mountain tomorrow.I am
going to enjoy the beauty of the Yellow
Mountain.I hope that I
have a pleasant journey.And you?
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求英语高手,帮我修改一下这篇英语作文.急.快,就今天My Summer HolidayEveryyear,Our summer holiday is in July and August.It’s a long time,and I can domany things during this time.The weather is very hot in the summer holiday,wemust
every year 分开
do many 分开
第二排的holiday后应该是句号,接下来的we大写
T-shirt应该是T-shirts
This summer holiday I graduated from elementary
school.应该是
Before this summer holiday,I just graduated from elementary
school.
In English class,and I get to know some new friends
改为In the English class,加上the
还有就是去掉and,
还有就是叙述你在课堂里的事情全部应该是过去时态,你都没有注意,太多动词了,我就不一一改了.

My Summer Holiday
Our summer holidays are from the July 1 to the August 31 yearly. It’s quite a long time, and I can do many things during this time. It is really muggy in the summer holiday. ...

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My Summer Holiday
Our summer holidays are from the July 1 to the August 31 yearly. It’s quite a long time, and I can do many things during this time. It is really muggy in the summer holiday. We
must wear T-shirt and shorts. Last month, I graduated from the elementary
school. So I don’t have to do any summer homework. It makes me feel very happy and excited. But I entered for an English class. In this English class, I have made some new friends. We get along well with one another.They are all friendly. In my spare time, I always listen to music such as pop,jazz and classical. Sometimes I ride my bicycle outside. I believe that doing more sports would made me stronger.By the way, My new bicycle is very fantastic.Time passes so quickly that summer has passed half. I have the opportunity to travel. I am going to visit the Yellow Mountain tomorrow. I am looking forward to enjoying the beauty of the Yellow Mountain.It must be wonderful.

我也只读高中，改得不好请谅解！

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My Summer Holiday Everyyear, Our 第二排的holiday后应该是句号，接下来的we大写 太多动词了，我就不一一改了。 My Summer