求批改SAT作文并评分,As Oscar Wilde said,truth is rarely pure and never simple.There are a lot of people see the downsides of lying to others while some people consent that lying to others is necessary in some occasion.From my standpoint,the a

求批改SAT作文并评分,As Oscar Wilde said,truth is rarely pure and never simple.There are a lot of people see the downsides of lying to others while some people consent that lying to others is necessary in some occasion.From my standpoint,the a
求批改SAT作文并评分,
As Oscar Wilde said,truth is rarely pure and never simple.There are a lot of people see the downsides of lying to others while some people consent that lying to others is necessary in some occasion.From my standpoint,the advantages of not telling truths outweigh disadvantages.It is true that if we always lie to others,all people in the society will be increditable and there is no truth between people.But telling truth is not always a wise way.
Chris Garner’s experience,in my favorite movie “the pursuit of happyness”can exemplify my idea.When Chris,a salesman who to be a stock broker,has no relationship,no background in this area.When he met Walt Ribbon again,a retired fund executive of Pacific Bell,he lied to him .Instead of tell him the truth that he is just doing an internship from a Dean Witter,he said that he owns a lot of company .Because his lie,Walt Ribbon invited him to sit with him in a box for the football match.During that time,Chris got familiar with a lot of people who might be his clients.This,definitely is an important reason why he can finally get that position.If he frankly tells him that he is just a salesman for a bone scanner,probably he would lose this chance.
White lies can also corroborate my standpoint.Christopher,my neighbor who is just 50 years old.His family was told that he has a skin cancer and can’t last for long.Instead of telling Christopher the truth,his son Bob choosed to hind it from him.The reason why he do this is he want Christopher to live happier rather than living while worring when he will die.Last month,Chris just dead in dream.If I were bob,I wouldmake the same decision as he did.
Cases like that has occurred again and again in every kind of field.Another crucial part where truth is not important is the national security.No one from the government can tell other countries where his or her military plan or the government’s budget.So telling leasing is actually a way to protect themselves.
To sum up,always be honest to others can be deleterious.we should tell leasing instead of always be frankly to everyone.

求批改SAT作文并评分,As Oscar Wilde said,truth is rarely pure and never simple.There are a lot of people see the downsides of lying to others while some people consent that lying to others is necessary in some occasion.From my standpoint,the a
第一段incredible不是increditable But不能单独成句,要有主句.
用例不错,有文学色彩 最后一段leasing古英语少用,用词不要大.大约10分吧