作文求修改好的追分!英语作文!I am very glad to have received your letter.you asked my about my life on weekends.now I will tell you something about it.as you can see,I am very busy on weekends.i have to do many homework and join lots of o

作文求修改好的追分!英语作文!I am very glad to have received your letter.you asked my about my life on weekends.now I will tell you something about it.as you can see,I am very busy on weekends.i have to do many homework and join lots of o
作文求修改好的追分!英语作文!
I am very glad to have received your letter.you asked my about my life on weekends.now I will tell you something about it.as you can see,I am very busy on weekends.i have to do many homework and join lots of out-of-school activities.Sometimes,I also do some housework to help my Mom.in my free time,I will go shopping with my friends,I think it not only do I love to but It is a good way to spend time staying with friends.what a great thing!although my weekends is enrich enough,I believe that many people has more relax weekends.i hope my weekends will more relaxed like others and i wish students to spend their weekends without homework.that's all.and how do you spend your weekends?please write to me soon.yours,lucy.
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作文求修改好的追分!英语作文!I am very glad to have received your letter.you asked my about my life on weekends.now I will tell you something about it.as you can see,I am very busy on weekends.i have to do many homework and join lots of o
I am very glad to have received your letter.you asked my about my life on weekends.now I will tell you something about it.as you can see,I am very busy on weekends.i have to do many(many--much) homework and join (join---join in)lots of out-of-school activities.Sometimes,I also do some housework to help my Mom.in my free time,I will go shopping with my friends,I think it(加上is) not only (because)do(去掉do) I love to but It is a good way to spend time staying with friends.what a great thing!although my weekends is enrich(改为rich) enough,I believe that many people has (has--have)more relax(relax--relaxing) weekends.i hope my weekends will(加上be) more relaxed (relax---relaxing)like others and i wish students to spend their weekends without homework.that's all.and how do you spend your weekends?please write to me soon.

I am very glad to received your letter.Thanks for asking (固定用法） about my weekend life.Now I would like to tell you something about it.as you can see, I am very busy on weekends.i have to do much ...

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I am very glad to received your letter.Thanks for asking (固定用法） about my weekend life.Now I would like to tell you something about it.as you can see, I am very busy on weekends.i have to do much homework(不可数名词） and join lots of out-of-school activities.Sometimes,I also do some housework to help my mother（书面语最好用）.in my free time,I like go shopping with my friends. it's not only do waht I want to do ,but also a good way to spend time staying with my friends.what a great thing!although my weekends are enriched(形容词放enough前面） enough.I believe that many people have relaxing weekends.i hope my weekends will be relaxing(ed是修饰人，ing是修饰物） like others and i wish students spend their weekends without homework.that's all.and how do you spend your weekends? Please give me reply as soon as possible
yours,
lucy.

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2.I have to do much homework(不可数）
3.i also help my mom with some housework(最好这样）
4.i think not only do i love to (倒装句)
5.many people have(复数）