自己用英语写的日记,希望有人改错.That day,you asked me:"Nobody 陪me to study dancing.Can you study dancing with me?"I had too many problems,but I want to 陪 you.Now,you tell me:"I won't continu studying."I am a little 惶恐.I am afri

自己用英语写的日记,希望有人改错.That day,you asked me:"Nobody 陪me to study dancing.Can you study dancing with me?"I had too many problems,but I want to 陪 you.Now,you tell me:"I won't continu studying."I am a little 惶恐.I am afri
自己用英语写的日记,希望有人改错.
That day,you asked me:"Nobody 陪me to study dancing.Can you study dancing with me?"I had too many problems,but I want to 陪 you.Now,you tell me:"I won't continu studying."I am a little 惶恐.I am afried of being alone.I want to ask you:"Can you 陪伴 me?"But,I won't do it,because I know you won,t 答应me.Well,I am always alone.I am lonely!Why everyone think me only when there are no another one 陪 them?(为什么每个人只在没有其他人陪的时候想起我?这句话总感觉不对劲.)Why I never have 勇气 to 拒绝 anyone?

自己用英语写的日记,希望有人改错.That day,you asked me:"Nobody 陪me to study dancing.Can you study dancing with me?"I had too many problems,but I want to 陪 you.Now,you tell me:"I won't continu studying."I am a little 惶恐.I am afri
You asked me that day "Nobody will study dancing with me.WIll you?" Although I had too many problems,I sitll wanted to accompany you.However,now you're telling me "I won't cnotinue learnig dance".I am a little anxious.I am afraid of being alone.I want to ask you "Can you accompany me?" But I won't do it.Because I know that you won't say yes.Well,I am always alone.I am lonely!Why everyone will only remember me when there is nobody else comes around?Why I never have courage to refuse anybody?

when there are no another one陪 them确实不对劲 改为 when there is no one to be near 吧

.Can you study dancing with me ....dancing改为dance.............I know you won,t 答应me.----Iknow you won't agree with me

问题有点多啊。。。学跳舞 不用study用learn dancing哦~有些地方可以省略，不用一直重复学跳舞的
That day,you asked me:"
Nobody 陪me to study dancing ---No one wants to learning chance with me.
Can you study dancing with me?"--...

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问题有点多啊。。。学跳舞 不用study用learn dancing哦~有些地方可以省略，不用一直重复学跳舞的
That day,you asked me:"
Nobody 陪me to study dancing ---No one wants to learning chance with me.
Can you study dancing with me?"---Would you like to learning dance together with me?
I had too many problems,but I want to 陪 you.---Although I was very busy，I promised you.
【But】now,you tell me:"I won't continu【e】 【dancing】."
I am a little 惶恐【fearful】.I am afried of being alone.
I want to ask you:"Can you 陪伴 me?"---can you stay with me?
But,I won't do it,because I know you won,t 答应me.---because i konw your answer is no.
Well,I am always alone.I am lonely!
Why everyone think me only when there are no another one 陪 them?
---why do everyone remember me only when he is alone?
Why I never have 勇气 to 拒绝 anyone?
---Why I have no courage to refuse others?

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1. 英语中没有冒号， 应换成逗号

2. Nobody 陪me to study dancing这句话完全不对，No one expect to learn dancing with me

3. Can you应换成Could you please或Will you

4. too many 换成so many<...

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   1. 英语中没有冒号， 应换成逗号

   2. Nobody 陪me to study dancing这句话完全不对，No one expect to learn dancing with me

   3. Can you应换成Could you please或Will you

   4. too many 换成so many

   5. 陪伴accompany或in company with

   6. continue

   7. 惶恐afraid,anxious

   8. I won't do it改成I beg for your understanding

   9. 答应promise

   10. Why do all people pick up me only when they are  under the shadow of their own

   11. Why do I never have  courage to exclude the others

   
   

   楼上回答比较多的两位我都看了，或多或少都有不妥的地方。恕我直言，文章本身价值就不高，我是在尽量给你把语句改成不chiglish，写完后，自己翻译一下，不觉得这样的作文很触动笑点吗？多看看优秀作文吧，写作文需要结构的，把句子写正确，其次才是语法，词汇。

   还有问题可以追问~

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