帮忙看一下我写的英文推荐信有无错误第一封As the Manager of CathayLife Insurance,I have had the pleasure of knowing Lin Li Hong for one year.He has been an diligent asistant and has astonished grade on his job.I would like to take t

帮忙看一下我写的英文推荐信有无错误第一封As the Manager of CathayLife Insurance,I have had the pleasure of knowing Lin Li Hong for one year.He has been an diligent asistant and has astonished grade on his job.I would like to take t
帮忙看一下我写的英文推荐信有无错误
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As the Manager of CathayLife Insurance,I have had the pleasure of knowing Lin Li Hong for one year.He has been an diligent asistant and has astonished grade on his job.I would like to take this opportunity to recommend Li Hong for your computer animation B.S.
I feel confident that he will continue to succeed in his new life.He is a versatile coworker and thus far his works have been exemplary.In the work,he has proven to be a stringent person who is able to successfully finish his study in FullSail.
Besides his work attitude,Li Hong is also an attractive friend.He has successful demonstrated leadership ability from by leading team to finish the company's goal.I believe that most of members of the same like him to be the team leader.He always try to help them and thinks what could be done when someone is in trouble.
It is for these reasons that I offer high recommendations for Li Hong without reservation.
Her drive and abilities will truly be an asset to your establishment.If you have any questions regarding this recommendation,please do not hesitate to contact me.
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As the ART manager of BINGO Digital Media Technology,I have had the pleasure of knowing Lin Li Hong for the year that he prepared for changing the major from financial to art.He has been an acute student and has astonished potential on art due to his grade of the entrance exam.For some reasons of our company,we had to drop off our computer animation seminar and refuse his admission.I would like to take this opportunity to recommend Li Hong for your computer animation B.S.because I know that FullSail is an excellent school in it and eagers for great students.
I feel confident that he will continue to succeed in his new major.He used to join the drama club in the university and finished some amazing works.As I observe,he has proven to be a take-charge person who is able to successfully develop plans and finish them.
Li Hong has also asistend us by offording some useful ideas in our conversation.He has successful management ability from his four year working-experience as a marketing manager.His ideas has been much help to our thinkings and works.He is not only a dedicated student but also an experienced person.
It is for these reasons that I offer high recommendations for Li Hong without reservation.
Her drive and abilities will truly be an asset to your establishment.If you have any questions regarding this recommendation,please do not hesitate to contact me.
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帮忙看一下我写的英文推荐信有无错误第一封As the Manager of CathayLife Insurance,I have had the pleasure of knowing Lin Li Hong for one year.He has been an diligent asistant and has astonished grade on his job.I would like to take t
倒数第三段有两个单词打错了...asistend和offording 应该是assisted 和offering...
基本没有语法错误,但文章的还是比较汉语化.流畅性也不够.不好改...不过可以传达作者的意思...老外也能明白.

粗看一下,assistant拼错,astonshing grade如果你一定要用astonish的话,第一篇第三行successful和demonstrated意思重复了,后面那个去掉,from by leading team去掉,members of the team? he always tries to...
any question没有s
后面一篇没时间看了.多检查一下吧...

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粗看一下,assistant拼错,astonshing grade如果你一定要用astonish的话,第一篇第三行successful和demonstrated意思重复了,后面那个去掉,from by leading team去掉,members of the team? he always tries to...
any question没有s
后面一篇没时间看了.多检查一下吧.有些地方可能是打错了

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