看看这篇短文改错I joined in Bird Watching class trip last weekend. I thought it would include a nice place to rest, for I was wrong. The climb burn my legs, and my legs ached. P.E. was easily compared to this. But when we reached on the top,

看看这篇短文改错I joined in Bird Watching class trip last weekend. I thought it would include a nice place to rest, for I was wrong. The climb burn my legs, and my legs ached. P.E. was easily compared to this. But when we reached on the top,
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I joined in Bird Watching class trip last weekend. I thought it would include a nice place to rest, for I was wrong. The climb burn my legs, and my legs ached. P.E. was easily compared to this. But when we reached on the top, I forgot about all of this. The clouds were so close that it seemed touchable. I had ever seen such a blue sky. Although I had seen many kind of birds before, this was the first time I’d ever realized that birds were beautiful. When it was time to leave, I felt strangely disappointing and realized that I wasn’t ready to go home!

看看这篇短文改错I joined in Bird Watching class trip last weekend. I thought it would include a nice place to rest, for I was wrong. The climb burn my legs, and my legs ached. P.E. was easily compared to this. But when we reached on the top,
第一行：in Bird--中间加a；for--but
第二行：burn--hurt；easily--easy
第三行：reached on--on去掉；it seemed--they
第四行：ever--never；kind--kinds；this--it
第五行：disappointing--disappointed

I joined Bird Watching class trip last weekend. I thought it would include a nice place to rest, but I was wrong. The climb hurt my legs, and my legs ached. P.E. was easily compared to this. But when ...

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I joined Bird Watching class trip last weekend. I thought it would include a nice place to rest, but I was wrong. The climb hurt my legs, and my legs ached. P.E. was easily compared to this. But when we reached the top, I forgot about all of this. The clouds were so close that they seemed touchable. I had ever seen such a blue sky. Although I had seen many kinds of birds before, this was the first time I’d ever realized that birds were beautiful. When it was time to leave, I felt strangely disappointed and realized that I wasn’t ready to go home！
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I joined in the Bird Watching class trip last weekend.
I thought it would be a good place to rest, but I was wrong. I hurt my legs during climbing and they ached.
P.E. was easily compared to...

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I joined in the Bird Watching class trip last weekend.
I thought it would be a good place to rest, but I was wrong. I hurt my legs during climbing and they ached.
P.E. was easily compared to this.(这句没看明白你要表达啥）
As soon as we reached the top, I forgot about all of this. The clouds were so close as if could be touched. I had never seen such a blue sky. Although I had seen many kinds of birds before, this was the first time I’d ever realized that birds were so beautiful.
When it was time to leave, I felt strangely disappointed and realized that I wasn’t ready to go home！

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第一行in改为the,没空中...........