初三口语自我介绍.介绍我是用中文写的在拿到网上用英汉翻译过来.但总感觉语序有点不对样的,所以请有英所以请英语好点的大侠们帮我看看这篇文章的语法是对的吗,而且够读一分钟么?Teach

初三口语自我介绍.介绍我是用中文写的在拿到网上用英汉翻译过来.但总感觉语序有点不对样的,所以请有英所以请英语好点的大侠们帮我看看这篇文章的语法是对的吗,而且够读一分钟么?Teach
初三口语自我介绍.介绍我是用中文写的在拿到网上用英汉翻译过来.但总感觉语序有点不对样的,所以请有英
所以请英语好点的大侠们帮我看看这篇文章的语法是对的吗,而且够读一分钟么?
Teacher: good morning, children. I am very pleased today I can stand here to make my self introduction, although I feel a little nervous. But anyway, I believe that my confidence will let everyone believe me! Ok. Now, let me introduce myself to you.
My name is *** enrolled in changsha *****. 14 years old this year. In school, I am a behavior habits good students. Even my achievement is not very good, can not be used with good compared to students. But I am working hard study.
In my spare time, I'd like to listen to music and reading novels. This type of hobby, can not only relaxes me, also enlarged my knowledge. Although I am primary three students, I can arrange their own time and learning with joy.
Finally I want everyone in my family will always healthy, smile everyday!
中文： 老师们,早上好.很高兴今天我能站在这里给你们做我的自我介绍,尽管我觉得有些紧张了.但是不管怎样,我相信我的自信将让每个人都相信我! 好了,现在,让我来介绍一下自己.
我叫 *** 就读于长沙市第****.今年14岁.在学校,我是一个行为习惯良好的学生.即使我的成绩不是很好,不能与好学生相比.但是我很努力的学习.
在我的业余时间,我想听音乐和看小说.这一类型的爱好,不仅可以使我感到放松,也扩大我的知识.虽然我是初级三学生,我可以安排自己的时间和学习充满喜悦.
最后我希望我家里的每个人都将永远健康,每天都保持笑容!
还有.如果不够的话我还应该补充点什么内容.特别点的.但是要容易背点的.因为英语确实不好

初三口语自我介绍.介绍我是用中文写的在拿到网上用英汉翻译过来.但总感觉语序有点不对样的,所以请有英所以请英语好点的大侠们帮我看看这篇文章的语法是对的吗,而且够读一分钟么?Teach
Good morning teacher and fellow classmates. I am very pleased today to stand before you to make my self introduction today. I feel a little nervous, but I believe that my confidence will have your faith! Now, let me tell you all about me.
My name is *** enrolled in changsha *****. I'm14 years old. At school, I am a good student because I behave well. Even though I don't have very good grades comparing to other students, but I do study very hard.
In my spare time, I like listening to music and reading novels. These hobbies not only relax me, they also allow me to gain knowledge. Although I am only a primary three student, I can balance my time well between learning and having fun.
Finally I want everyone in my family to always have good health and full of laughter everyday!
本来打算用其他颜色来改的, 可惜百度上好像没这个功能.您大致的意思保留了,改动的地方比较多,有需要我解释的就留言吧.