英语高手看过来!求帮忙修改给港大的自我介绍!麻烦高手看看还能怎么修改修改,感激不尽!但求精细!Self IntroductionHKU,one of the best universities all over the world,has been appealing to me since I was at a young ag

英语高手看过来!求帮忙修改给港大的自我介绍!麻烦高手看看还能怎么修改修改,感激不尽!但求精细!Self IntroductionHKU,one of the best universities all over the world,has been appealing to me since I was at a young ag
英语高手看过来!求帮忙修改给港大的自我介绍!
麻烦高手看看还能怎么修改修改,感激不尽!但求精细!
Self Introduction
HKU,one of the best universities all over the world,has been appealing to me since I was at a young age.If I have the honor to study in HKU,I can study with other outstanding students and excellent professors from around the world,which can definitely broaden my horizon and strengthen my skills in all fields on a large scale.Moreover,HKU provides its students with lots of opportunities to study abroad and exchange their different views with each other,which becomes why I am so longing to studying in HKU.
As for major,after my serious consideration,I choose the architecture as my first choice,the pharmacy as the second and the business administration as the third.Architecture reflects the real history and development of a people,and I have always been amazed by the brilliance of the traditional architecture home and abroad.Driven by my curiosity,I’m eager to know more about the art of architecture.Also,I have great interest in biology and chemistry,which I think will contribute a lot to creating a new medicine that cures the patients in suffering.Meanwhile,I’m fond of the business administration because it covers almost every field in business and it not only helps a company run more swiftly,but also helps it maximizes its profit.I believe these three majors are most suitable for me.
Concerning about the future,if I am admitted to HKU,I believe I will make more progress and accomplish some achievement in my major.

英语高手看过来!求帮忙修改给港大的自我介绍!麻烦高手看看还能怎么修改修改,感激不尽!但求精细!Self IntroductionHKU,one of the best universities all over the world,has been appealing to me since I was at a young ag
HKU,one of the best universities in the world,has been appealing to me since I was at a young age.If I have the honor to study in HKU,I will have the opportunity to study with other outstanding students and excellent professors from around the world,which can definitely broaden my horizon and strengthen my skills in my chosen fields.Moreover,HKU provides its students with many opportunities to study abroad and exchange their different views with each other,which becomes one of the reasons for me to choose HKU.
As for major,after serious consideration,Architecture will be my first choice,Pharmacy as the second and Business Administration as the third.Architecture reflects the real history and development of the human kind,and I have always been amazed by the brilliance of the traditional architecture home and abroad.Driven by my curiosity,I am eager to know more about the art of architecture.Also,I have great interests in biology and chemistry,which I believe will contribute greatly to creating a new medicine that cures the patients in suffering in the future.Meanwhile,I am fond of Business Administration because it has a broad appraoch in business and it not only helps a company run more efficiently,but also helps it maximizes its profit.I believe these three majors are most suitable for me.
Concerning about the future,if I am admitted to HKU,I believe I will make more progress and accomplish more achievements in my major.