帮我看看这句话语法!在线等!这句话怎么看怎么不舒服,在线等呀This report will explore the main causes of the increasing demand of water in Australia in agriculture, industry and consumer demand, especially in Western Australia

帮我看看这句话语法!在线等!这句话怎么看怎么不舒服,在线等呀This report will explore the main causes of the increasing demand of water in Australia in agriculture, industry and consumer demand, especially in Western Australia
帮我看看这句话语法!在线等!
这句话怎么看怎么不舒服,在线等呀
This report will explore the main causes of the increasing demand of water in Australia in agriculture, industry and consumer demand, especially in Western Australia and the solution about it.
亲，不是不懂语法，是能不能帮我改的顺一点，好一点。很急啊！！！

帮我看看这句话语法!在线等!这句话怎么看怎么不舒服,在线等呀This report will explore the main causes of the increasing demand of water in Australia in agriculture, industry and consumer demand, especially in Western Australia
这是一句长句,一看就头晕.
首先看来中文：这份报告将探究澳大利亚,尤其是其西部,农业、工业及居民用水的需水量不断增加的主要原因以及解决方式.
理解了大义之后看原文.
找到主语This report
谓语动词will explore
找到宾语 causes and solution
然后构建出句子的主干：This report will explore causes and solution.
即：这份报告将探究原因和解决方式.
至于This report will explore the main causes (( of the increasing demand of water in Australia in agriculture,industry and consumer demand,especially in Western Australia )) and the solution about it.
至于(( ))内的部分,都是修饰 causes 的,它们就是 什么什么的原因 的“什么什么”部分
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这份报告将要探讨澳大利亚（尤其是西澳大利亚）的农业、工业以及消费对水不断上升的需求的主要起因及解决办法。

This report will explore the main causes and the solution.主句（其他都是对主句的补充）
in Australia in agriculture, industry and consumer demand 是对 the increasing demand of water的补充
it 指 the increasing dema...

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This report will explore the main causes and the solution.主句（其他都是对主句的补充）
in Australia in agriculture, industry and consumer demand 是对 the increasing demand of water的补充
it 指 the increasing demand of water in Australia in agriculture, industry and consumer demand

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一、the increasing demand of water in Australia in agriculture, industry and consumer demand中，有三处需要修改：

1、in Australia 调整到这部分的末尾
2、demand of water 改为 demand for water（对水的需求）
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一、the increasing demand of water in Australia in agriculture, industry and consumer demand中，有三处需要修改：

1、in Australia 调整到这部分的末尾
2、demand of water 改为 demand for water（对水的需求）
3、第二个 demand 与上文已经提到的 increasing demand of 重复，删除。

二、especially in Western Australia and the solution about it.

1、especially in Western Australia 应该跟在前面的 in Australia 的后面
2、the solution about it 跟在 main cause 的后面，改为 the solution in particular

全句修改如下：

This report will explore the main causes, the solution in particular, of the increasing demand for water in agriculture, industry and consumer in Australia, especially in Western Australia.

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这份报告将系统研究澳大利亚特别是西澳大利亚的农业、工业和消费者对水源逐步增长需求的主要原因，尤其是研究对需求的解决办法。

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