麻烦大家帮我把错误的语法纠正一下,my petI remember the first day you came to my home,stanger person and stanger place makes you feel scared.I gently hold you up and you are curious about looking at me.That expression was so cute.I'll g

麻烦大家帮我把错误的语法纠正一下,my petI remember the first day you came to my home,stanger person and stanger place makes you feel scared.I gently hold you up and you are curious about looking at me.That expression was so cute.I'll g
麻烦大家帮我把错误的语法纠正一下,
my pet
I remember the first day you came to my home,stanger person and stanger place makes you feel scared.I gently hold you up and you are curious about looking at me.That expression was so cute.I'll give you a name,
it's called mini.That day the benginning of my life has been accompanied
by your.
You never carp at the food.As long as i took a small pot with shaking you will immdeiately come.When i put down a pot that you couldn't wait to start eatting.I think this is your best hobby.
You always need someone to accompany fear of lonliness.Every time you go to bed when i will put a moppet at your side or play the redio all night.
You will sleep like a child,like a quiet.Every morning I woke up all by your cry and then you want me holding on like a baby with you.I have no choice but to get up and holding you and with you sitting on the balcony of the sun.It has become a habit.At that time I feel very warm.
But the bad news coming.The doctor told me that you get sick.However,it is difficult because you were too young to save.Doctor advised me to let you Euthanasia.How can I not work hard to let you leave this world!I try to tell yourself you can survive.Treatment is a painful process.You have an injection every day.Thus passed day by day,ultimately there is no miracle you are still left me.
We have no time to take picture together,the cold turned into a small box of your final destination.This is my greatset regret.
While you at my side the short time that i am still very grateful to you bring my happiness.I hope you can be healthy and happy in Heaven.You are my irreplaceable love,mini.

麻烦大家帮我把错误的语法纠正一下,my petI remember the first day you came to my home,stanger person and stanger place makes you feel scared.I gently hold you up and you are curious about looking at me.That expression was so cute.I'll g
stanger person and stanger place makes you feel scared===
strange persons and strange place made you.
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I gently hold you up and you are curious about looking at me====
.you were curious about me
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I'll give you a name,it's called mini====
I then gave you a name,Mini
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That day the benginning of my life has been accompanied by our.==
That day is the beginning of my life with you
实在太多了,改不过来,不过通过上面的四句话可以看出,楼主在时态问题上非常的马虎,楼主可以自己动手把全文的时态改成统一时态.另外注意以下有些句子缺少谓语动词.