英语翻译请大家帮忙把下面英文中的文法错误找出下面是中文对照,The development of industry cluster theory is getting more and more rich In theory from Weber's locational agglomeration experienced theory,Schumpeter ‘s Innova

英语翻译请大家帮忙把下面英文中的文法错误找出下面是中文对照,The development of industry cluster theory is getting more and more rich In theory from Weber's locational agglomeration experienced theory,Schumpeter ‘s Innova
英语翻译
请大家帮忙把下面英文中的文法错误找出下面是中文对照,
The development of industry cluster theory is getting more and more rich In theory from Weber's locational agglomeration experienced theory,Schumpeter ‘s Innovation and industrial agglomeration theory,Hoover’s optimal scale of industrial clustering theory until today’s "industrial clusters" of Porter.This paper put forward to promote the sustainable development of forestry industries countermeasures on the base of discusses industrial clustering in the occurrence and its impact on forestry development economic effects.
产业集聚理论的发展从韦伯的区位集聚论,经历了熊彼特的创新产业集聚论理论、胡佛产业集聚最佳规模论一直到现在波特的“产业群”,理论上越来越丰富,本文在论述产业集聚的发生及其对林业发展的经济效应基础之上,提出了促进林业可持续发展的产业集聚对策.
是找错误哦,机器免了,我觉得自己的翻译水平还是比机器好一点

英语翻译请大家帮忙把下面英文中的文法错误找出下面是中文对照,The development of industry cluster theory is getting more and more rich In theory from Weber's locational agglomeration experienced theory,Schumpeter ‘s Innova
产业集聚理论的发展从韦伯的区位集聚论,经历了熊彼特的创新产业集聚论理论、胡佛产业集聚最佳规模论一直到现在波特的“产业群”,理论上越来越丰富,本文在论述产业集聚的发生及其对林业发展的经济效应基础之上,提出了促进林业可持续发展的产业集聚对策.
The development of industry cluster theory,from Weber's locational agglomeration experienced theory,Schumpeter's Innovation and industrial agglomeration theory,Hoover's optimal scale of industrial clustering theory to today's "industrial clusters" of Porteris,is becoming increasingly theoretically rich.Based on analysis of the formation of industrial clustering and its economic impact on forestry development,the following paper proposes a few applications of industrial clustering,aiming to promote sustainable development of forestry industries.
我大改了 帮你的语言改的proper&formal了很多

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Development of the theory of industrial clustering from Weber's theory of locational agglomeration experienced Schumpeterian innovation theory of industrial clustering theories, Hoover-scale in...

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Development of the theory of industrial clustering from Weber's theory of locational agglomeration experienced Schumpeterian innovation theory of industrial clustering theories, Hoover-scale industries on the best one until now Porter's "industrial clusters", in theory, more and more rich This paper discusses the occurrence of industrial clustering and its implications for forestry development based on economic effects, put forward to promote the sustainable development of forestry industries countermeasures.
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发展产业集群理论越来越丰富的理论从韦伯的区位集聚经验理论，熊彼特的创新和产业集聚理论，胡佛的最佳规模的产业集群理论，直到今天的“产业集群”的波特。本文提出，以促进可持续发展的林业产业对策的基础上，讨论了产业集群的发生及其对林业发展的经济效应。

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is getting more and more rich in theory 这里改成has been greatly enriched theoretically会正式一点
from Weber's...Porter.这里可以这样写:during the development of Weber's...(一样)...Hoover's optimal scale of industra...

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is getting more and more rich in theory 这里改成has been greatly enriched theoretically会正式一点
from Weber's...Porter.这里可以这样写:during the development of Weber's...(一样)...Hoover's optimal scale of industral clustering theory to THE VERY RECENT CONCEPT OF "industrial clusters" BY Porter.
This paper--->The following essay
这后面改成tries to promote the measures of industral clustering that can faciliate the sustainable development of forestry industries on the basis of the discussions over both the occurrence of industrial clustering and the economic impact of the clustering onfoetry industries.
后面几乎是大改了,保证流畅与正式.有一个问题在于里面那些专业理论词汇我是没什么把握的所以就萧规曹随了..
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翻译得很不错.
找不出什么毛病
两点建议:
本文在论述产业集聚在林业领域的形成及对之产生的经济效应基础之上
这里感觉coourrence 是说产业集聚在这一领域的形成,而不是产业集聚本身的形成
提出了促进林业可持续发展的(产业集聚)对策...

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翻译得很不错.
找不出什么毛病
两点建议:
本文在论述产业集聚在林业领域的形成及对之产生的经济效应基础之上
这里感觉coourrence 是说产业集聚在这一领域的形成,而不是产业集聚本身的形成
提出了促进林业可持续发展的(产业集聚)对策

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The industrial agglomeration theory has developed from Weber's locational agglomeration theory, Schumpeter's innovative industrial agglomeration theory, Hooever's theory of optimum scale of industrial...

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The industrial agglomeration theory has developed from Weber's locational agglomeration theory, Schumpeter's innovative industrial agglomeration theory, Hooever's theory of optimum scale of industrial agglomeration all the way to the current notion of "industrial cluster" as proposed by Porter, offering more and more substantial theorectical illustrations. Based on the discussion of the occurrence of industrial agglomeration and its economic effects on the development of forestry, this article proposes countermeasures of industrial agglomeration for the sustainable development of forestry.

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这种长篇幅段落一般都没人看的，特别是你这悬赏分还不是太高，节哀把。很难有人正紧回答的，建议你专门去问分类名人，我一般都是这样的