大神检查英语语法与时态的错误,谢谢To be honest I'm only able to write just a little English . I met A pretty girl in my college a years ago.Shortly afterwards, we fell in love, but good times don't last long,The man who is handsome,h
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大神检查英语语法与时态的错误,谢谢To be honest I'm only able to write just a little English . I met A pretty girl in my college a years ago.Shortly afterwards, we fell in love, but good times don't last long,The man who is handsome,h
大神检查英语语法与时态的错误,谢谢
To be honest I'm only able to write just a little English . I met A pretty girl in my college a years ago.Shortly afterwards, we fell in love, but good times don't last long,The man who is handsome,humorous appeared in her life.She deeply loved him soon,At any rate,we were lover at that time.my heart was smashed to pieces.,we broke up in the end .Flash by as quickly as a weaver's shuttle.I’ve already gone from a boy .into a man.Some day , When I was waitting for the subway,I glanced at her on the opposite of the platform
At that moment,it called up my bittersweet memory .Although Fixing on each other, we seemed as if we had never seen before.Words couldn’t express my sorrow.just when I wondered wether she was well or not in these years,the subway came.
A word of goodbye, two of the world .
大神检查英语语法与时态的错误,谢谢To be honest I'm only able to write just a little English . I met A pretty girl in my college a years ago.Shortly afterwards, we fell in love, but good times don't last long,The man who is handsome,h
I met a petty girl in my college a few years ago.
but wonderful time doesn't go long.
The man who is handsome and humorous appears in her life.
I've already become a mature man.
on the opposite platform.
my bitter but sweet moemory was called up.
No words could express my sorrow.
Goodbye as one word,apart for two worlds.
一年前是one year ago,而且要注意时态问题
she has been in love with him deeply .看到这里 我就看不下去了 太中化了 看得费力