帮我看看我的英语信件是否有问题.NEED AN ENGLISH TEACHERHello,overseas!Can You Speak English？I'm looking for an English speaking student as a teacher to help me practicing my spoken English for the TOEFL test witch I'll take next year.
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帮我看看我的英语信件是否有问题.NEED AN ENGLISH TEACHERHello,overseas!Can You Speak English？I'm looking for an English speaking student as a teacher to help me practicing my spoken English for the TOEFL test witch I'll take next year.
帮我看看我的英语信件是否有问题.
NEED AN ENGLISH TEACHER
Hello,overseas!Can You Speak English？
I'm looking for an English speaking student as a teacher to help me practicing my spoken English for the TOEFL test witch I'll take next year.
You will get well paid.We can get together to negotiate for a fair price.
Additionally,we can make good friends.I can tell you anything you want to know about China.
I'm looking forward to your calling.
Tel:XXXXXXXXXXX
My Name:Burgess Chen
帮我看看我的英语信件是否有问题.NEED AN ENGLISH TEACHERHello,overseas!Can You Speak English？I'm looking for an English speaking student as a teacher to help me practicing my spoken English for the TOEFL test witch I'll take next year.
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首先，第三排有个错词，应该是which，改进的句子有，you can learn chinese with the help of me and this can surely lead to a win -win situation.