英语作文 大家帮我看下这篇文章有没有问题,如果有帮我揪出来改一下,Yesderday ,a bissinessman told me that he is bought some diamonds form South Afraic .He said he wants us to protect his diamonds ,because the diamonds are ve

英语作文 大家帮我看下这篇文章有没有问题,如果有帮我揪出来改一下,Yesderday ,a bissinessman told me that he is bought some diamonds form South Afraic .He said he wants us to protect his diamonds ,because the diamonds are ve
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大家帮我看下这篇文章有没有问题,如果有帮我揪出来改一下,
Yesderday ,a bissinessman told me that he is bought some diamonds form South Afraic .He said he wants us to protect his diamonds ,because the diamonds are very valuable.He worried about the diamonds will be stolen.
The other day ,I with my workmates went to the airport .The plane was late.Wo were wait for the plane all morning.At 11:00 ,the plane was arrive,I and five workmates were waiting inside the main building ,and the others were waiting for the airfield.All of us to be alert.We saw two men took the the parcel off the plane and carried it into the Customs House .While two of us were keeping guard at the door,two others opend the parcel.The bussinessman was standing near the parcel.He looked at the parcel,but when the parcel was opened,he shouted "Oh my god .." We were all surprised,because happend a strange thing which the bussinessman worried about----the diamonds were stolen.
然后帮我补个结尾.就说后来我们发现了一个可疑人物,抓住他之后找回了钻石.

英语作文 大家帮我看下这篇文章有没有问题,如果有帮我揪出来改一下,Yesderday ,a bissinessman told me that he is bought some diamonds form South Afraic .He said he wants us to protect his diamonds ,because the diamonds are ve
Yesterday, a businessman told me that he had bought some diamonds from South Africa. He said he wanted us to protect his diamonds, becuase the diamonds were very valuable. He was afraid of that they might be stolen.
The other day, my workmates and I went to the airport. The flight was late. We waited for the plane all the morning. At 11, the plane arrived. Five workmates and I waited inside the main building, and the others waited in the airfield. All of us were alert. We saw two men take the parcel off the plane and carry it to the Customs House.
While two of us were keeping guard near the door, the other two opened the parcel with the businessman standing near the parcel. He looked at the parcel and shouted ‘Oh my God’ when the parcel was opened. We were all surprised because the strange thing, which the businessman worried about happened—the diamonds were stolen.
We contacted the airport staff as soon as possible. They provided us the record of video tape in which we found a suspicious man. And according to the information of his arrival, we got his name and address. We called the police and they went to house. The police searched his house and in a book case they found all the diamonds. This man was arrested.

Yesterday ,a business man told me that he bought some diamonds form South Africa .He said he wanted us to protect his diamonds ,because the diamonds were very valuable.He worried about the diamonds wo...

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Yesterday ,a business man told me that he bought some diamonds form South Africa .He said he wanted us to protect his diamonds ,because the diamonds were very valuable.He worried about the diamonds would be stolen.
Today,my workmates and I went to the airport .The plane was late.We waited for the plane for the whole morning.At 11:00 ,the plane arrived,five workmates and I were waiting inside the main building ,and others were waiting in the airfield.All of us were alert.We saw two men took the the parcel off the plane and carried it into the Customs House .While two of us were keeping guard at the door,two others opened the parcel.The business man was standing near the parcel.He looked at the parcel,but when the parcel was opened,he shouted "Oh my god .." We were all surprised,because the thing the business man worried about happened----the diamonds were stolen. Fortunately we found a dodgy person in the airport later on. We caught him and found the diamonds in his pocket.

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