The shief included a not every time he sent Sam more money.这句是正确的吗?能不能改成：The shief sent Sam more money included a not every time.a note

The shief included a not every time he sent Sam more money.这句是正确的吗?能不能改成：The shief sent Sam more money included a not every time.a note
The shief included a not every time he sent Sam more money.这句是正确的吗?
能不能改成：The shief sent Sam more money included a not every time.
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The shief included a not every time he sent Sam more money.这句是正确的吗?能不能改成：The shief sent Sam more money included a not every time.a note
正确的.虽然这句话有两句话组成,但它中间用了连词every time来连接两个句子.
你改掉之后意思完全不同了.（对于你改掉的句子）而且included也要改成including（介词）,否则一个句子中就出现两个动词了