看看我的英语作文啦,有错改一下,Do you want to read Amelia Atwater Rhodes`s book?there have a chance that you can take prat in signing sales of her books in our school`s meeting room.Amelia Atwater Rhodes was born in1984,when she was 3 ye

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看看我的英语作文啦,有错改一下,DoyouwanttoreadAmeliaAtwaterRhodes`sbook?therehaveachancethatyoucantakepratinsigning

看看我的英语作文啦,有错改一下,Do you want to read Amelia Atwater Rhodes`s book?there have a chance that you can take prat in signing sales of her books in our school`s meeting room.Amelia Atwater Rhodes was born in1984,when she was 3 ye
看看我的英语作文啦,有错改一下,
Do you want to read Amelia Atwater Rhodes`s book?there have a chance that you can take prat in signing sales of her books in our school`s meeting room.
Amelia Atwater Rhodes was born in1984,when she was 3 years old,she try to made up stories by herself ,in 11 years later,she published her first book---,and published the second book when she was 16 years old.Now she is still writing,she ever tried to writing science fiction,novels,fantasy and so on.so she was regarded as the one of the young writer all around the U.S and choosed “the 20 young man who will change the world”.
Boys and girls ,if you want,please go to school`s meeting room on 20th,this month.
Last,everyone must get politely,wait in a line and keep quiet,use english communicate with others.

看看我的英语作文啦,有错改一下,Do you want to read Amelia Atwater Rhodes`s book?there have a chance that you can take prat in signing sales of her books in our school`s meeting room.Amelia Atwater Rhodes was born in1984,when she was 3 ye
第二句“There has a chance...”用单数,这个懂吧
第二段标点符号是不是乱敲的啊
When she was 3 years old,she tried...过去式
11 years later,不用in
注意大小写
后面用she had her first book published效果好些
书名用斜体就可以了,不用那个“《”,这个是中文标点符号
注意标点,Now she is,writing.She.注意大小写
as one of the writers...one前不用the,因为后面有了；复数
US怎么可以AROUND呢?地球才可以,遍及全美用all over the US
and choosed as.woman...加个as,还有性别被你弄混了
go to the school...the别漏了
后面结尾可以last but not least高级句型
结尾太繁琐,简洁点

there have a chance
and published the second Now she is still writing,
tried to writing science
,use english communicate with othe
改改比较好

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