求英语大神来看看我的英语小短文这是作文要求和题目：1.what rules do you have at your family2.please tell a story to show one of your family rules3how do your family rules influence you 这是我文章,来看一下有没有错
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求英语大神来看看我的英语小短文这是作文要求和题目：1.what rules do you have at your family2.please tell a story to show one of your family rules3how do your family rules influence you 这是我文章,来看一下有没有错
求英语大神来看看我的英语小短文
这是作文要求和题目：
1.what rules do you have at your family
2.please tell a story to show one of your family rules
3how do your family rules influence you
这是我文章,来看一下有没有错误什么的
求英语大神来看看我的英语小短文这是作文要求和题目：1.what rules do you have at your family2.please tell a story to show one of your family rules3how do your family rules influence you 这是我文章,来看一下有没有错
with me不用逗号
they had made many family rules that I must obey.
or weekend就好
one sunny day,I went to play with my friends without done my homework.My parents were mad,so I had a punishment for my behavior.
However,i can be more improve by these family rules.
But I feel the second rule is unfair,I hope I allow to play computer games sometimes.It makes me relaxed.
1.firstly, secondly应该改为first, second mad为疯狂之意，用在父母身上不合适吧！改为angry即可
2."One ady it was ......for my bad behavior"这句话应该断成两个独立的句子更好
3.最后一句it前面的逗号去掉直接改为which变为从句形式- - 你们两个说的我都要改吗
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1.firstly, secondly应该改为first, second
2."One ady it was ......for my bad behavior"这句话应该断成两个独立的句子更好
3.最后一句it前面的逗号去掉直接改为which变为从句形式
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