Do you often stay up late?If you don't ,well,I have to tell you it is not something good to do it .A week ago,I stayed up vrey late ,reading a very interested book.The book was so good that I just couldn't keep my eyes on it.So I read and read and if

Do you often stay up late?If you don't ,well,I have to tell you it is not something good to do it .A week ago,I stayed up vrey late ,reading a very interested book.The book was so good that I just couldn't keep my eyes on it.So I read and read and if
Do you often stay up late?If you don't ,well,I have to tell you it is not something good to do it .A week ago,I stayed up vrey late ,reading a very interested book.The book was so good that I just couldn't keep my eyes on it.So I read and read and if I finished it,it was already six o'clock the next morning.I went to school at seven o'clock as usually.But I was so tired that I couldn't keep my eyes open.I fall asleep in class.The teacher criticized me.What's worse,she caught a cold during the sleep that day.But I suggest you never stay up late.
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Do you often stay up late?If you don't ,well,I have to tell you it is not something good to do it .A week ago,I stayed up vrey late ,reading a very interested book.The book was so good that I just couldn't keep my eyes on it.So I read and read and if
Do you often stay up late?If you do ,well,I have to tell you that it is not good to do it .A week ago,I stayed up vrey late ,reading a very interesting book.The book was so good that I just couldn't keep my eyes from it.So I read and read and when I finished it,it was already six o'clock the next morning.I went to school at seven o'clock as usual.But I was so tired that I couldn't keep my eyes open.I fell asleep on class.The teacher criticized me.What's worse,I caught a cold during the sleep that day.So I suggest you never stay up late.

something - anything否定
interested - interesting修饰物
if i finished it - when i finished it
as usually - as usual
fall asleep - fell asleep
she caught a cold -I

Do you often stay up late？If you don't(do) ,well, I have to tell you it is not something good to do it(删除it）.A week ago,I stayed up vrey late ,reading a very interested (interesting) book.The book was...

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Do you often stay up late？If you don't(do) ,well, I have to tell you it is not something good to do it(删除it）.A week ago,I stayed up vrey late ,reading a very interested (interesting) book.The book was so good that I just couldn't(could) keep my eyes on it. So I read and read and if(when) I finished it,it was already six o'clock the next morning.I went to school at seven o'clock as usually(usual).But I was so tired that I couldn't keep my eyes open.I fall(fell) asleep in class.The teacher criticized me. What's worse,she(I) caught a cold during the sleep that day.But I suggest you (should)never stay up late.

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If you don't -If you do
something-anything
reading-read
interested-interesting
couldn't -could
and if-when
usually-usual
fall-fell
she caught a cold -I caught a cold
But I suggest you never stay up late. -So I suggest you don't stay up late.