看看这句英语有没有问题?With the rapid development of economy and society,and the increasing of people’s life,the car ownership has risen rapidly.
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看看这句英语有没有问题?With the rapid development of economy and society,and the increasing of people’s life,the car ownership has risen rapidly.
看看这句英语有没有问题?
With the rapid development of economy and society,and the increasing of people’s life,the car ownership has risen rapidly.
看看这句英语有没有问题?With the rapid development of economy and society,and the increasing of people’s life,the car ownership has risen rapidly.
不应该用increasing 吧,它又不是名词,而且因为increase本身就有名词词性,所以一般不用它的ing形式作名词.用increase 就好了
还有这里的rise用的也不是很好,用develop 更好些,不过那样就和前面有重复了,真麻烦
我觉得改成with the rapid development of economy and society, and the increasing quality of people's life, the car ownership has risen fastly.关于increase赞同楼上的说法,increase 本身就是有名词性,我改成increasing quality of peo...
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我觉得改成with the rapid development of economy and society, and the increasing quality of people's life, the car ownership has risen fastly.关于increase赞同楼上的说法,increase 本身就是有名词性,我改成increasing quality of people's life,更能体现人民生活质量的提高。最后一个rapidly避免重复改成fastly,或者dramatically(戏剧的,经常用来表示极大的改变)。这里强调私家车拥有率的迅猛提升。
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and the increasing of people’s life 人们生活水平的提高。觉得用increasing不合适,improving似乎更恰当。