correct mistakes i want to go to bed after lunch .but i must write a diary .because it is necessary to do myhomework .i thought doing well in english is too hard,as my basis very poor .i recognized a man whose name is nanguo .he run a small a factary

correct mistakes i want to go to bed after lunch .but i must write a diary .because it is necessary to do myhomework .i thought doing well in english is too hard,as my basis very poor .i recognized a man whose name is nanguo .he run a small a factary
correct mistakes
i want to go to bed after lunch .but i must write a diary .because it is necessary to do myhomework .i thought doing well in english is too hard,as my basis very poor .
i recognized a man whose name is nanguo .he run a small a factary which produce clothing in the city of tazhou .on internet .,we chatted about jib,reading ,plan tied ,he invited me to spend weeked ,but i must think of this thing .,i am waiting for him on OICQ but he couldnt come from then ,i dont what he was doing ,

correct mistakes i want to go to bed after lunch .but i must write a diary .because it is necessary to do myhomework .i thought doing well in english is too hard,as my basis very poor .i recognized a man whose name is nanguo .he run a small a factary
这是我的看法,有些地方不连贯,我改了一下,希望你能看明白.Good luck!
I want to go to bed after my lunch.But I must write a diary first because it is part of my homework.I think it is hard to do well in english as my basis of English very poor .
I know a man whose name is Nanguo.He runs a small a clothing-factory in the city of Tazhou.We chatted about job,reading and plan tied online.He invited me to spend this weekend with him ,but i should think of this thing before I give him my answer.But he is like disappeared since then as I couldn't see him on OICQ.I don't know what happen to him.

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想要在午餐之后上床睡觉。但是我 一定写一本日记。因为做 myhomework 是必需的。我想在英语中做得好太难, 当我的基础之时非常贫穷的。
我辨认出了一个的男人。他跑一小的生产 tazhou 的城市衣服的 factary 。在英特网上。,我们闲谈有关船首三角帆的事, 读 ,计划系 , 他邀请了我花费星期，但是我一定想到这一件事物。,我正在 OICQ 上等候他...

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正确的错误 ?
想要在午餐之后上床睡觉。但是我 一定写一本日记。因为做 myhomework 是必需的。我想在英语中做得好太难, 当我的基础之时非常贫穷的。
我辨认出了一个的男人。他跑一小的生产 tazhou 的城市衣服的 factary 。在英特网上。,我们闲谈有关船首三角帆的事, 读 ,计划系 , 他邀请了我花费星期，但是我一定想到这一件事物。,我正在 OICQ 上等候他但是他 couldnt 然后来自 ,我dont 他正在做的 ,

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but i must write a diary
1.write diary
because it is necessary to do myhomework
1.my homework
i thought doing well in english is too hard, as my basis very poor
1.do well

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but i must write a diary
1.write diary
because it is necessary to do myhomework
1.my homework
i thought doing well in english is too hard, as my basis very poor
1.do well
2.because my basic knowledge of English is very poor
he run a small a factary which produce clothing in the city of tazhou
1. He runs a small factory, which produce clothes in the city of tazhou
On the Internet, we chatted about our jobs, reading and plan tied. He invited me to spend weekend with him, but i must think about this thing . I am waiting for him on OICQ but he couldn't come, I don't know what's wrong with him

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I wanted to go to bed after lunch ,but I must write a diary .Because it was necessary to do my homework .I thought doing well in English was too hard,as my basis was very poor .
I encourtered...

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I wanted to go to bed after lunch ,but I must write a diary .Because it was necessary to do my homework .I thought doing well in English was too hard,as my basis was very poor .
I encourtered a man whose name was Nanguo .He run a small factory which produced clothing in the city of Tazhou . Through Internet ,we chatted about job, reading ,plan tied .He invited me to spend weekend ,but I must think of this matter .I was waiting for him on OICQ but he hasn't come from then on. I don't what he was doing.

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在午餐之后上床睡觉。但是 i 一定写一本日记。因为做 myhomework 是必需的。i 在 english 中做得好太难, 如我的基础非常贫穷。
i 辨认出了一个名字是 nanguo 的男人。他跑小的生产 tazhou 的城市衣服的 factary 。在英特网上。,我们闲谈有关船首三角帆，阅读的事 , 计划系 , 他邀请了我花费星期，但是 i 一定觉得这一件事物。, i 正在 OIC...

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在午餐之后上床睡觉。但是 i 一定写一本日记。因为做 myhomework 是必需的。i 在 english 中做得好太难, 如我的基础非常贫穷。
i 辨认出了一个名字是 nanguo 的男人。他跑小的生产 tazhou 的城市衣服的 factary 。在英特网上。,我们闲谈有关船首三角帆，阅读的事 , 计划系 , 他邀请了我花费星期，但是 i 一定觉得这一件事物。, i 正在 OICQ 上等候他但是他 couldnt 来自然后 , i dont 他正在做什么 ,

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i had wanted to go to bed after lunch,but i had to write a diray.Beacause it`s necessary to finish my homework.i thought that doing well in English was too hard to me for my poor english foundation.

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i had wanted to go to bed after lunch,but i had to write a diray.Beacause it`s necessary to finish my homework.i thought that doing well in English was too hard to me for my poor english foundation.
i knew a men whose name is Nanguo.he ran a small factory which produced clothes in the city of Tazhou.
o......rubbish.....f*ck
他说纠正错误啊先生。。。。

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