有一篇英语作文帮忙改下My favoriteteacher is the British.The reason why he is the best teacher is that he isyoung like my brother.He is positive,thoughtful and enthusiastic people.Henot only help us study the math and science,but also help

有一篇英语作文帮忙改下My favoriteteacher is the British.The reason why he is the best teacher is that he isyoung like my brother.He is positive,thoughtful and enthusiastic people.Henot only help us study the math and science,but also help
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My favoriteteacher is the British.The reason why he is the best teacher is that he isyoung like my brother.He is positive,thoughtful and enthusiastic people.Henot only help us study the math and science,but also help us to solve some Problemsin My Life.His positive attitudetowards life impacts me become more optimistic.In instance,he thinks we are the best student.Healways helps us to study in free time.When we did not have a good score ofmath,he often said it is not matter and I can help you to get a better score.Heis very confident people,but he is not haughty.He believes I am the bestteacher.In fact,he is a diligent man,and he is sensitive to students needs.Hecan know our shortcoming,and give us advice to deal with it.He always prepareteaching plan until midnight.He is outgoing and polite,because he treatsstudents with respect and want to make friend with students.He always takesjoke with us and we also can do it.In his class,we feel very happy.

有一篇英语作文帮忙改下My favoriteteacher is the British.The reason why he is the best teacher is that he isyoung like my brother.He is positive,thoughtful and enthusiastic people.Henot only help us study the math and science,but also help
My favorite teacher is British. The reason why he is the best teacher for me is that he is as young as my brother. He is a positive, thoughtful and enthusiastic person. He not only helps us study maths and science, but also helps us solve some Problems in my life. His positive attitude towards life makes me become more optimistic. For instance, he thinks we are the best students. He always helps us study in spare time. When we did not get good marks for maths, he often said it did not matter and I could help you to get a better score next time. Although he is a very confident person, he is not haughty. He believes that he is the best teacher. In fact, he is a diligent man, and he is sensitive to students' needs. He knows our shortcomings, and give us advices to deal with them. He always prepares teaching plan until midnight. He is outgoing and polite as he treats students with respect and wants to make friends with them. He always makes jokes with us and we can also reply him with wisdom. In his class, we feel very happy.

1 He is positive, thoughtful and enthusiastic people改为 He is a positive, thoughtful and enthusiastic people
2Henot only help us改为Henot only helps us，but also help us后面的help也要加s
3 In instance改为For instance