求高手给我修改一下考研英语面试的自我介绍~Good morning,my dear teachers,my dear professors.I am very glad to be here for your interview.My name is ***,i am 23 years old .I come from baoding,a very beautiful aicent city.My undergrat

求高手给我修改一下考研英语面试的自我介绍~Good morning,my dear teachers,my dear professors.I am very glad to be here for your interview.My name is ***,i am 23 years old .I come from baoding,a very beautiful aicent city.My undergrat
求高手给我修改一下考研英语面试的自我介绍~
Good morning,my dear teachers,my dear professors.I am very glad to be here for your interview.My name is ***,i am 23 years old .I come from baoding,a very beautiful aicent city.My undergratuade period will be accomplished in hebei medical university in July ,2009;and now,I am trying my best for obtaining a key to Beijing university of chinese medicine.
The reason that i choose to study chinese traditional medicine is very simple.i come from a long line of herbalist doctors.when i was a little girl,my parents send me to play the gymnastics.i do loved it.unfortunately,i was badly injured by the bad skill of the young coach,both my left leg and arm were paralysis.but maybe i am still a lucky dog,my father is a herbalist doctor,he used the acupuncture on me every day,and i even acupuncture all by myself.2 months later,i was feeling myself again.maybe i was destined to be a doctor.
Generally speaking ,I am a person with great perserverence.I am a hard working student especially do the thing I am interested in.I will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is.During the days preparing for the examination of postgraduates,I insist on get up before 8 oclock and go to bed until 12 oclock every day,no matter how sleepy I was.It was really a hard time .And just owning to this,I could be standing here now.
I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning.Of course,if I am given a chance for advanced studies in this famous University,I will stare to effort to master a good command of advance my capability.
it is said that when you get up every morning,you have 2 choices:1,go on sleeping,go on dreaming,2,get up to pursue ur dream.i'll choose the latter.so please give me a chance to chase my dream!

求高手给我修改一下考研英语面试的自我介绍~Good morning,my dear teachers,my dear professors.I am very glad to be here for your interview.My name is ***,i am 23 years old .I come from baoding,a very beautiful aicent city.My undergrat
Good Morning, dear Professors and teachers (Don't use "my" because it is too personal on this official occasion. Title of "Professors" is higher than "Teachers". Therefore, Professors must go first.), it is my honour to be interviewed today. My name is **** & is 23 years old. I came from a very beautiful ancient city - boading (not sure what this is, assume it is name of the city where you came from). I'll be graduated with major of "***" [give the name of your program or whatever you'll be graduated with] in Herbei Medical University in July 2009. Meanwhile, I am aiming for the continuous studies of Chinese medicine in Beijing University.
Chinese traditional medicine is my favourite subject because of my childhood experience and family history. When I was young, I learnt gymnasics. I loved this sport very much. Unfortunately, I had a very bad injured on my left leg (no need to mention why you injured, whose fault was that in an interview. People don't like to see that). I was paralyzed. Fortunately, my father is a herbalist. He treated me with acupuncture daily and show me how to do that as well. Tow months later, I was fully recovered. From then on, I set my goal to learn Chinese traditional medicine and would like to be a herbalist when I grow up. (you can't say you are 'destined to be a doctor' because you haven't yet to be one).
I am a very dedicated person. Once I set my goal, I aim at it in full force. I also work hard on things that I devoted to. Despite any difficulties, I will do my best to achieve it. While I was preparing for my postgraduate examination, I worked long hours for it. (no need to explain what time you woke up in the morning and what time you sleep at night. professors & teachers expect you to spend a lot of time to prepare for this exam). Being admitted to university for the undergraduation program was the reward of my dedicated work.
I always believe that "if we don't keep up a good work, we shall easily fall behind". If I granted with the opportunity to advance my studies in this well-known university, I am sure I'll enhance my knowledge on this subject. (sorry, I can't figure out what you mean on the next sentence).
People always said when you get up in the morning, you have 2 choices: (1) go on sleeping, go on dreaming; (2) get up to pursue your dream. I'll choose the 2nd choice - to pursue my dream. I sincerely hope that you, dear Professors & Teachers, will grant me a chance to pursue my dream.
Kandykat, you did quiet a good job. Wish you luck on your interview. If there is anything I can help you, please do not hesitate to contact me. Good LUCK!