修改一段英语主要是修改语法问题,要是有更合适的句子更好了.This time,I didn't feel upset when the reality strongly struck to me.I had already known these things will happen at last.Therefore I'm calm with no disappointment,and
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修改一段英语主要是修改语法问题,要是有更合适的句子更好了.This time,I didn't feel upset when the reality strongly struck to me.I had already known these things will happen at last.Therefore I'm calm with no disappointment,and
修改一段英语
主要是修改语法问题,要是有更合适的句子更好了.
This time,I didn't feel upset when the reality strongly struck to me.I had already known these things will happen at last.Therefore I'm calm with no disappointment,and think "Anyhow life will go on,whether you full of sadness or not."
I'm glad your appearance in my life during my best ages,just as a bunch of sunshine bursts into the darkness.
Both of us will be a better person for now and in the future,I always believe firmly.
修改一段英语主要是修改语法问题,要是有更合适的句子更好了.This time,I didn't feel upset when the reality strongly struck to me.I had already known these things will happen at last.Therefore I'm calm with no disappointment,and
第一句最好直接用现在时 第二句用现在完成时 然后你第三句用现在时就很好了.
第三句 I will suggest you to change it to "Therefore I think of 'Anyhow life will go on,whether you are full of sadness or not.' without disappointment".
第四句 “your showing up” may be better
第五局 just delete “for now”
hope it helps!