一段英语,帮我修改下,使之语法正确,语句通顺.The main point of contention for me is that that technology helps us is much more than that technology takes from us,for example,calculators help people work out very complex mathmatics pro

一段英语,帮我修改下,使之语法正确,语句通顺.The main point of contention for me is that that technology helps us is much more than that technology takes from us,for example,calculators help people work out very complex mathmatics pro
一段英语,帮我修改下,使之语法正确,语句通顺.
The main point of contention for me is that that technology helps us is much more than that technology takes from us,for example,calculators help people work out very complex mathmatics problems and promote the development of math and related areas.Computer can be applied to almost every areas and become one of the most important tools of people.

一段英语,帮我修改下,使之语法正确,语句通顺.The main point of contention for me is that that technology helps us is much more than that technology takes from us,for example,calculators help people work out very complex mathmatics pro
The main point of contention for me is that technology gives us more thingsthan it takes from us.For example,calculators help people work out very complex mathmatics problems and promote the development of math and related areas.Computer can be applied to almost every area and has become one of the most important tools that people use in life.

The main point of the contention for me is that what the technology helps us is much more than what the technology takes from us.For example, calculator can help people work out very complex mathmatic...

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The main point of the contention for me is that what the technology helps us is much more than what the technology takes from us.For example, calculator can help people work out very complex mathmatics problems and promote the development of math and related subjects. Computer can be applied to almost areas and has become one of the most important tools of people.

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这句话语法是是没有问题的，只是第一句话中that引导的表语从句里含有一个that引导的引导的主语从句，显得很罗嗦.

感觉逻辑上有些混乱，computer已经包括calculator了，你是想说computer的功能吗？还有一个问题是computer从我们身上带走了什么？没有比较，怎么知道利大于弊呢？这是我给你提的意见~~