这几句话对不对?I have joined the organization in the last few years.The city has became more and more beautiful in the last few years.除了第二句“became”因改为become，还有什么错吗？

I wish I will have a coat这句话对不对? I have more apples than Tom.这句话对不对?rt I have fewer pens than you这句话对不对 he just have to.这句话对不对 I have passed the 9-rank exam for the piano这句话对不对 I have passed the 9-rank exam for the piano这句话对不对 I have passed the 9-rank exam about the piano这句话对不对 I have told you don't hurt yourself.这句话对不对（语法上）? 下面这句话对不对I have already made a lot of friends I have enough food to supply for some time.这句话中supply的用法对不对? I have a baseball and Steve has a volleyball 这句话语法对不对 I living in china这句话对不对 Have you got many apples?Yes,I have.这句话用many对不对还有many在什么时候变成any 这几句话对不对?I have joined the organization in the last few years.The city has became more and more beautiful in the last few years.除了第二句“became”因改为become，还有什么错吗？ I have a teacher very friendly这句话对不对?如果对,very friendly是teacher的补语吗? I have been more quiet than in the past.这句话的in the past 这样用对不对? I have recieved a e-fax from the Immigration Department of Hong Kong这句话写得对不对? 帮我看几句话写得对不对Do you have a football?Yes,I do.But I had it one hour ago,I can't find it now.Do you have a pair of shoe?