帮个忙,看看哪里错了呢?Today ,I can performed a little story for myself.I think it is a little success.I want to speak English very fluent someday.I am waiting for coming.I think I have no more word to say what I want to say.I have less know
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帮个忙,看看哪里错了呢?Today ,I can performed a little story for myself.I think it is a little success.I want to speak English very fluent someday.I am waiting for coming.I think I have no more word to say what I want to say.I have less know
帮个忙,看看哪里错了呢?
Today ,I can performed a little story for myself.I think it is a little success.I want to speak English very fluent someday.I am waiting for coming.I think I have no more word to say what I want to say.I have less knowledge.I will be going on studying.
The day before yesterday,I called Ms.LIN to help me to find a whole-day job.She told me that she will call me when have called others to do it.But two day were gone,she was not call me.But,why?Although I wonder she tell me that I start to wok soon.Yeah.I think she won’t forget.I really want to some interesting work,make me happy and give to me what I want to need.
帮个忙,看看哪里错了呢?Today ,I can performed a little story for myself.I think it is a little success.I want to speak English very fluent someday.I am waiting for coming.I think I have no more word to say what I want to say.I have less know
错误的地方很多,而且语法错误严重
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Today,I told a little story in English by myself.I think it is a little success.I want to speak English fluently someday.I'm waiting that day to come.I feel that I have no more words to express what I want to say.I have little knowledge.I will go on studying.
The day before yesterday,I called Ms.Lin to help me to find a full-time job.She told me that she will call me if I was needed.But two days were gone,she didn't call me.Why?although I wondered she tell me that I will start to work soon.I believe she won't forget it.I really want to do an interesting work,making me happy and giving me what I need.
Good luck to you!