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英语改错题````答案马上处理``速度``谢I’m glad to receive your E-mail.I'd like to discuss(这排没)the problem which you mentioned in it (to) youIt's true that some computer games are (real) interstingand they can sometimes make you (f
英语改错题````答案马上处理``速度``谢
I’m glad to receive your E-mail.I'd like to discuss(这排没)
the problem which you mentioned in it (to) you
It's true that some computer games are (real) intersting
and they can sometimes make you (felt) relaxed .However,it
(uses) you too much time to do that.You are not a little boy.
You should learn to control (ourselves).Why not
(trying) to finish your homework first every day and then
spend a little time (surf) the Interner.You'll find many other
(thing) that are also very interesting such as visiting cool
webisites ,learning the latest news (but) listening to the music.
I'm sure you'll become (an) useful person in the future.
括号里面是错的
有的是多咯词 有的是缺咯词
还有的是错咯词 有一句是对的
大家帮下哈``

英语改错题````答案马上处理``速度``谢I’m glad to receive your E-mail.I'd like to discuss(这排没)the problem which you mentioned in it (to) youIt's true that some computer games are (real) interstingand they can sometimes make you (f
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I'm glad to receive your E-mail. I'd like to discuss
the problem which you mentioned in it (with) you
It's true that some computer games are (really) interesting
and they can sometimes mak...

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I'm glad to receive your E-mail. I'd like to discuss
the problem which you mentioned in it (with) you
It's true that some computer games are (really) interesting
and they can sometimes make you (feel) relaxed. However, it
(takes) you too much time to do that. You are not a little boy.
You should learn to control (yourself). Why not
(try) to finish your homework first every day and then
spend a litte time (surfing) the Internet. You'll find many other
(things) that are also very interesting such as visiting cool
websites, learning the latest news (besides) listening to the music.
I'm sure you'll become (a) useful person in the future.

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with
really
feel
takes
yourself
try
surfing
things
and
a

I’m glad to receive your E-mail. I'd like to discuss(这排没)
the problem which you mentioned in it (to-- with 因为discuss sth. with sb.) you
It's true that some computer games are (real-- really)...

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I’m glad to receive your E-mail. I'd like to discuss(这排没)
the problem which you mentioned in it (to-- with 因为discuss sth. with sb.) you
It's true that some computer games are (real-- really) intersting
and they can sometimes make you (felt--feel) relaxed .However, it
(uses--- takes) you too much time to do that. You are not a little boy.
You should learn to control (ourselves--yourself).Why not
(trying--- try) to finish your homework first every day and then
spend a little time (surf-- surfing) the Interner.You'll find many other
(thing--things) that are also very interesting such as visiting cool
webisites ,learning the latest news (but--and) listening to the music.
I'm sure you'll become (an -- a) useful person in the future.
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I’m glad to receive your E-mail. I'd like to discuss(这排没)
the problem which you mentioned in it (to) you
mention sth. to sb 向...提及...，括号里的to不能少；
说成 the problem you mentioned 也可以
It's...

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I’m glad to receive your E-mail. I'd like to discuss(这排没)
the problem which you mentioned in it (to) you
mention sth. to sb 向...提及...，括号里的to不能少；
说成 the problem you mentioned 也可以
It's true that some computer games are (real) intersting
really interesting很有趣，真有趣；副词修饰形容词；
and they can sometimes make you (felt) relaxed .However, it
felt改为feel，因为made是命令性动词，后接不带to的动词不定式；
(uses) you too much time to do that. You are not a little boy.
占用或耗费某人时间，用takes或costs；
You should learn to control (ourselves).Why not
根据语境，应该是控制你自己，用yourself；
(trying) to finish your homework first every day and then
why not后可直接接动词try；
spend a little time (surf) the Interner.You'll find many other
spend some time doing sth. 所以这里用surfing the Internet,上网；
(thing) that are also very interesting such as visiting cool
many other things，这里thing显然用复数；
webisites ,learning the latest news (but) listening to the music.
but在此是错用，因为前后成分表示并列，应该用and；

I'm sure you'll become (an) useful person in the future.
应该用冠词a，因为useful发音的第一个音节不是元音，尽管u是元音字母。
以上仅代表个人看法，仅供参考！

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