给这篇高中英语作文打分(满分25)谢谢Go to university near or far? Different classmates have different opinions about going to a university outside or inside their city. Some students approve of the former choice. They hold the view tha

给这篇高中英语作文打分(满分25)谢谢Go to university near or far? Different classmates have different opinions about going to a university outside or inside their city. Some students approve of the former choice. They hold the view tha
给这篇高中英语作文打分(满分25)谢谢
Go to university near or far?
Different classmates have different opinions about going to a university outside or inside their city.
Some students approve of the former choice. They hold the view that only by living far from home can we develop the ability of living independently. There are also believed to be far more opportunities to make friends outside the city. What's more, they say they are able to gain more experience intended for their future jobs.
On the contrary, others would like to stay inside their city because they and their parents will be able to look after each other. The short distance also brings other convenience such as a good environment, which is beneficial to academic study. Plus, more money will be saved compared to living outside their city.
After all, just follow your heart and make a wise decision.
最好是高中英语老师:)
题目： 《二十一世纪英语报》）（21st Century）组织了一个题为“报考本市大学还是外地大学？”的讨论。下面是你班同学的一些观点。请根据下面提示写一篇报道你班讨论情况的短文。词数100-120左右。（文章开头已给出）
赞成报考外地大学的理由：
1．锻炼独立生活能力 2．交友机会多 3．可为将来的工作获取更多经验
赞成报考本地大学的理由：
1．离父母近，可互相照顾 2．环境好，利于学习 3．节约开支
Go to university near or far？
Different classmates have different opinions about going to a university outside or inside their city．

给这篇高中英语作文打分(满分25)谢谢Go to university near or far? Different classmates have different opinions about going to a university outside or inside their city. Some students approve of the former choice. They hold the view tha
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如果你是高中学生，单从文字上来说，这篇文字的分数在8-15分之间都是可以理解的，文字不多，运用的语法和复合句还有些欠缺。
从意义上来说，文章已经将自己的观点基本的阐述清楚了。所以应该可以给到10分左右。满分是25分啊。为什么那么低？“文字不多，运用的语法和复合句还有些欠缺”，具体是指什么？ 另外，高中英语作文必须写100词左右。 您可以详细说下吗？我从来没有得过8-15分的分数，一般都...

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如果你是高中学生，单从文字上来说，这篇文字的分数在8-15分之间都是可以理解的，文字不多，运用的语法和复合句还有些欠缺。
从意义上来说，文章已经将自己的观点基本的阐述清楚了。所以应该可以给到10分左右。

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最好附上作文题目，一般来讲，高考作文是根据要点有没有全，句子表达是否正确，有无高级词汇和句型等来定分的，还有你的书写也非常关键。如果本文要点已全，书写清楚，再加上好的结构，能打22分左右。题目现已给出。你的意思是怎么写也不能满分？...

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最好附上作文题目，一般来讲，高考作文是根据要点有没有全，句子表达是否正确，有无高级词汇和句型等来定分的，还有你的书写也非常关键。如果本文要点已全，书写清楚，再加上好的结构，能打22分左右。

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