求帮看一下这几句英文语法是否正确,可追分,求速度权威,错误帮改前面讲的是我最近做了一个调查,略The chart shows that 60 percent of them think reading novels will be good for us.At the same time,the rest of them do

求帮看一下这几句英文语法是否正确,可追分,求速度权威,错误帮改前面讲的是我最近做了一个调查,略The chart shows that 60 percent of them think reading novels will be good for us.At the same time,the rest of them do
求帮看一下这几句英文语法是否正确,可追分,求速度权威,错误帮改
前面讲的是我最近做了一个调查,略
The chart shows that 60 percent of them think reading novels will be good for us.At the same time,the rest of them don't think so.
I think reading novels can enlarge our knowledge,we can learn many things from novels.
These novels have negative effects on our mind.If we are addicted in novels,most of us won't have good marks.
We need to read good novels at right time.
这是作文里的,我想知道有没有什么错,不知道有些地方用单数还是复数,还有些啥的.
= 我只是节选部分我拿不准的发上来。中间会少是必须的= =

求帮看一下这几句英文语法是否正确,可追分,求速度权威,错误帮改前面讲的是我最近做了一个调查,略The chart shows that 60 percent of them think reading novels will be good for us.At the same time,the rest of them do
The chart shows that 60 percent of them think reading novels -IS- good for us.At the same time,the rest of them don't think so.
I think reading novels can enlarge our knowledge,-AND- we can learn many things from novels.
HOWEVER,SOME novels have negative effects on our mind.If we are addicted in THOSE novels,most of us won't have good marks.
We need to read good novels at right time.
用大写修正了,写得不错,内容有点少,句式挺好的.

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The chart shows that 60 percent of them think reading novels will be good for us.At the same time,the rest of them don't think so.
I think reading novels can (expand the ra...

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打了括号的是修改过的~~~ 你看看~
The chart shows that 60 percent of them think reading novels will be good for us.At the same time,the rest of them don't think so.
I think reading novels can (expand the range of our knowledge,that is to say) we can learn many things from novels.
These novels have (a negative effect on) our mind.If we are addicted in novels,most of us won't (get) good marks.
We need to read good novels at (a) right time.

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The chart shows that 60 percent of them support that reading novels will be good for us.While the others don't think so.
In my opinion, reading novels can broaden our eyes. In other words, we can ...

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The chart shows that 60 percent of them support that reading novels will be good for us.While the others don't think so.
In my opinion, reading novels can broaden our eyes. In other words, we can learn many things from novels.
These novels have a negative effect on our mind.If we are addicted to novels too much, we will take a risk to fail the exam.
We should read good novels at the right time.

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