请帮我修改这篇英文文章When I first accepted the English class in the Junior High School,all I know about English was just how to read and write the ten numbers.In the Junior High School I met the teacher who helped me step into the English

请帮我修改这篇英文文章When I first accepted the English class in the Junior High School,all I know about English was just how to read and write the ten numbers.In the Junior High School I met the teacher who helped me step into the English
请帮我修改这篇英文文章
When I first accepted the English class in the Junior High School,all I know about English was just how to read and write the ten numbers.
In the Junior High School I met the teacher who helped me step into the English world.She was absolutely a very strict woman.At that time,almost all the students,of course include me,hated the mid-aged woman,because she was too strict with me.Everyday we need to spend almost 3 hours on English homework.So,we had little time to do other homework,to do something we like to do,in that way,we had to sleep late,but get up early.We had to do the endless writing work and recite the boring words and texts!And nearly the teacher punishes everyday we had to face the fear of!At that time,we even planned to hit her after graduate from the Junior High School.But we can’t help but acknowledge that our English level is greater than other classes because of her teaching style.
When I entered the Senior High School,I can swear that I really pay little attention to English study,sometimes I didn't take the English book home for over a week!At that School I met another English teacher------A handsome man whose spoken English is so pretty good that when we talked with him,it seems like we were talking with a real foreigner.And he likes me very much,so nearly every class he will give me the chance to improve my spoken English.
To sum up,but for the exact teaching of my first teacher,I would not have the basic standard in English.On the other hand,thanks to my second English teacher,I have all the achievement in spoken English.
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请帮我修改这篇英文文章When I first accepted the English class in the Junior High School,all I know about English was just how to read and write the ten numbers.In the Junior High School I met the teacher who helped me step into the English
当I 第一次接受了英语课在初中,所有我知道英语是正义的怎么读和写十个数字.
在初中我遇见了帮助我跨步入英国世界的老师.她绝对是一名非常严密的妇女.那时,几乎所有学生,当然包括我,恨中间年迈的妇女,因为她是太严密的与我.每天我们需要在英国家庭作业上度过几乎3 个小时.如此,我们有一点时间做其它家庭作业,做某事我们喜欢做,方式,我们必须后睡觉,但早早起来.我们必须完成不尽的文字工作和背诵乏味词和文本!并且老师几乎惩罚每天我们必须面对恐惧!那时,我们甚而计划击中她在毕业生以后从初中.但我们能’t 帮助但承认,我们的英国水平是大于其它类由于她教的样式.
当我上了高中学校,我能发誓,我真正地给予一点注意对英国研究,有时我didn't 作为英国书家在一个星期!在那所学校我遇见了讲话的英语是那么相当好的其它英国老师英俊的人当我们与他谈了话,它似乎如我们与一个真正的外国人谈话.并且他非常喜欢我,那么几乎他将给我机会改进我的讲话的英语的每类.
总结,但为我的第一位老师确切的教学,我不会有基本的标准用英语.另一方面,由于我的第二名英语老师,我有所有成就用讲话的英语.