请帮忙修改语法错误,· Make effective planning and budgeting,and sets the targets for sales representatives.· Investigate market price and update promotion eventevery week· Sell products to clients andcustomers,handle costumers’ questions
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请帮忙修改语法错误,· Make effective planning and budgeting,and sets the targets for sales representatives.· Investigate market price and update promotion eventevery week· Sell products to clients andcustomers,handle costumers’ questions
请帮忙修改语法错误,
· Make effective planning and budgeting,and sets the targets for sales representatives.
· Investigate market price and update promotion eventevery week
· Sell products to clients andcustomers,handle costumers’ questions and complains,maintainingand improving relationships with the client.
· Manage daily operations,motivating team members.
请帮忙修改语法错误,· Make effective planning and budgeting,and sets the targets for sales representatives.· Investigate market price and update promotion eventevery week· Sell products to clients andcustomers,handle costumers’ questions
存在些小问题,单复数之类的.
还有一个比较大的问题:看这些句子的内容应该是个人简历或者是招聘启事的job description吧?如果是前者,每句的动词可以用一般过去式;如果是后者,建议用进行时,不顾一般现在时应该也可以.
你的这几句话有的用一般现在时,有的用的进行时,不一致了.
时态请根据这段内容的用途修改吧.
第一句:budgeting改为budget, sets改为set
第二句:price改为prices(建议:是否写清楚是哪些部分的价格?), promotion events用复数
第三句:动词时态不一致
第四句:动词时态