some students do not like taking about their parents often as if their parents love them very much are you going on well with your parents?you and your parents will be very happily if you can be friends .here are some way to have a good talk with the
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some students do not like taking about their parents often as if their parents love them very much are you going on well with your parents?you and your parents will be very happily if you can be friends .here are some way to have a good talk with the
some students do not like taking about their parents often as if their parents love them very much are you going on well with your parents?you and your parents will be very happily if you can be friends .here are some way to have a good talk with them .find a good time to talk ,like when you are eating dinner .going out for walk and watching tv .tell them 766384664 you are interested in,or ask them about their lives when they are young .they love to talk about our past!meet them face to face and listen to them carefully .be honesty ,and you parents will trust you more
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some students do not like taking about their parents often as if their parents love them very much are you going on well with your parents?you and your parents will be very happily if you can be friends .here are some way to have a good talk with the
1.^don't (before "love")
2.right.
3.happily -- > happy
5.eating --> having
6.are --> were
7.our --> their
8.honestly --> honest
here is the revised one:(with some typing mistakes pointed out).
some students do not like taking(talking) about their parents often as if their parents don't love them very much(.) are you going on well with your parents?you and your parents will be very happy if you can be friends.here are some way (ways) to have a good talk with them.find a good time to talk,like when you are having dinner.(,) going out for walk and watching tv.tell them 766384664(what) you are interested in,or ask them about their lives when they were young.they love to talk about their past!meet them face to face and listen to them carefully.be honest,and you parents will trust you more.
talking as if(as though)happily(happy)way(ways)going(go)for walk(for a walk)lives(life)our(their)be honesty(to be honest)
happily——happy way -ways to talk --talking be honesty -to be honesty
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Some students do not like talking about their parents often (even) if their parents love them very much. Are you going on well with your parents? Y...
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修改已在括号处注明!楼主是不是最后一句的your错打成you了?如果是的话,刚好十处错误!
Some students do not like talking about their parents often (even) if their parents love them very much. Are you going on well with your parents? You and your parents will be very (happy) if you can be friends. Here are some (ways) to have a good talk with them. Find a good time to talk, like when you are eating dinner, going out for (加入a) walk (or) watching TV. Tell them (what) you are interested in, or ask them about their (life) when they (were) young. They love to talk about (their) past! Meet them face to face and listen to them carefully. Be (honest), and (you/your?) parents will trust you more.
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