现在,他的工资比他刚开始工作那一年的工资多出4倍.下面写的对吗,有没有更好的写法?Now,he earns 4 times money more than he earned when he started work .Now,he earns 4 times money more than he earned at his first working
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现在,他的工资比他刚开始工作那一年的工资多出4倍.下面写的对吗,有没有更好的写法?Now,he earns 4 times money more than he earned when he started work .Now,he earns 4 times money more than he earned at his first working
现在,他的工资比他刚开始工作那一年的工资多出4倍.下面写的对吗,有没有更好的写法?
Now,he earns 4 times money more than he earned when he started work .
Now,he earns 4 times money more than he earned at his first working year.
第一，需不需要money，第二，than 后面需不需要再加动词？第三，at his first working year 这种说法
现在,他的工资比他刚开始工作那一年的工资多出4倍.下面写的对吗,有没有更好的写法?Now,he earns 4 times money more than he earned when he started work .Now,he earns 4 times money more than he earned at his first working
1）不需要说money~一般earn就是指赚钱~
2）than后面加动词更严谨~但是可以写成than he did,避免重复~
3）at his first working year这种说法不大好~首先,at应该和时间点搭配,而与year搭配的应该是in或during~可以改成~during his first year as a worker/ during his first year at the company/ during his first year working.
这样子改出来应该是：Now,he earns 4 times more than he did when he just started working.
其实更简单的说法是：Now,he earns 4 times more than his first salary.