帮忙看看有没有错误do you know a hamster thery are a kind of pet.they come from siberia.they are short-bodied,with tails much shorter than body tength,and have small furry ears,short stocks legs,and wide feet.hamsters are nocturnal animals .t
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帮忙看看有没有错误do you know a hamster thery are a kind of pet.they come from siberia.they are short-bodied,with tails much shorter than body tength,and have small furry ears,short stocks legs,and wide feet.hamsters are nocturnal animals .t
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do you know a hamster thery are a kind of pet.they come from siberia.they are short-bodied,with tails much shorter than body tength,and have small furry ears,short stocks legs,and wide feet.hamsters are nocturnal animals .they are active at night .they are cute and of small size and are easy to take care of.however,they almost sleep all day.as they are small in size ,many people especially young kids ,likes to keep them as pets.they can be kept in cager and be easily taken care of.(先悬,再赏）
帮忙看看有没有错误do you know a hamster thery are a kind of pet.they come from siberia.they are short-bodied,with tails much shorter than body tength,and have small furry ears,short stocks legs,and wide feet.hamsters are nocturnal animals .t
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第六个单词应该是they 后面那个地名要大写Siberia
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body length
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As they are small in size,many people,especially,young kids,like to keep them as pets.
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can be kept in cage and easily fed.避免重复用词,另外cage拼写错误
有几个是拼写错误,大概是粗心没打对,另外注意下标点符号以及大小写,文章整体不错!
怎么说呢，你这里错误的地方太多，如果要改的话就不是小手术了，
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hamster 前面别加a吧，直接说Do you know hamsters?注意句子开头的单词要大写，后面有多处此情况。with tails much shorter than body's length. 后面的改为They sleep almost all day会更好。注意cage而不是cager.
差不多就这些吧，你这里面的语法用得蛮复杂的哟~~~...
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hamster 前面别加a吧，直接说Do you know hamsters?注意句子开头的单词要大写，后面有多处此情况。with tails much shorter than body's length. 后面的改为They sleep almost all day会更好。注意cage而不是cager.
差不多就这些吧，你这里面的语法用得蛮复杂的哟~~~
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