英语翻译找出有没有语法错误,给我点建议是最好的!I love you ,the love between boys and girls,the feeling is so hard and let me can't believe my self.I never feel like this before,I even don't have relationship with boys before,I sw

英语翻译找出有没有语法错误,给我点建议是最好的!I love you ,the love between boys and girls,the feeling is so hard and let me can't believe my self.I never feel like this before,I even don't have relationship with boys before,I sw
英语翻译
找出有没有语法错误,给我点建议是最好的!
I love you ,the love between boys and girls,the feeling is so hard and let me can't believe my self.I never feel like this before,I even don't have relationship with boys before,I swear .Perhaps I am so sensitive about emotion,that let me can't help myself.The result is how i suffer from my emotion,i want to chat with you everytime.I think about you every single time ,every single day since i know you .Wherever,whenever...When I went to hospital for my mom,I missed you,when I went to the supermarket ,I missed you ,when I was study ,I missed you .When I prepared for sleep,I missed you .
Can somebody teach me how to deal the problem I almost can't breathe then.
I don't know how you feeling about me,perhaps just ambiguous,yes?I know you are angry with me!But I am really suffer more than you~,I don't know what should I do then...I Don't Know.
"FOREVER" the word is so unreal to us ,yes,I once had promise that I am here for you forever ,but the my feeling has changed!I love you,I loved one boy on the computer,I don't treat you as my friend any more,every time I chat with you ,the sound from my heart is:I love you Rapheal,I want to let you know everything in my life,I want to share with you in every problem and happiness that happened.Can we meet one day?Can we hold on each other one day?Can we get married in future?OMG Am I stupid?I often think like this when we were chatting!
What we can do on the truth?The truth is we can't meet each other forever .
Dear,you have your life,and me too.I told myself like that ,but my mind still let me degenerate.
You are special to me,and I am happy that we me meet,but i don't know how could I carry on ...Can you give me some words?Anything is okay,Please give me some response.

英语翻译找出有没有语法错误,给我点建议是最好的!I love you ,the love between boys and girls,the feeling is so hard and let me can't believe my self.I never feel like this before,I even don't have relationship with boys before,I sw
修改如下：
1)and let me can't believe my self ==》can't believe myself.
2),that let me can't help myself.==》that I can't help holding.
3）The result is how i suffer from my emotion,i want to chat with you everytime.=》 Suffering from it,how i want to have a chat with you everytime.
4) I think about you every single time...=> I think of you every single second,every single day since i've known you .
5) when I was study ,=> when I was studing.
6) Can somebody teach me how to deal the problem I almost can't breathe then.=> Could anybody teach me how to deal with it?I can hardly breathe because of you.
7) I don't know how you feeling about me => how do you feel about me
8) But I am really suffer more than you~,=>but I'm suffering from it more than you are.
9) "FOREVER" the word is so unreal to us => the word "FOREVER" is ...
10) but the my feeling has changed!=> but my feeling changed!(或者has been changed)
11) I want to share with you in every problem and happiness that happened.=>I want to share every tears and joys with you.(that happened加了以后是要限定 只分享已经发生了的苦乐么?如果不仅仅分享过去,还分享现在和将来的,就不要加限定）
12) Can we hold on each other one day?=> Can we embrace each other one day?（hold on 停留,暂停?）
13) Am I stupid?=> Am I crazy?
14) and I am happy that we me meet,but i don't know how could I carry on => ...that we could meet,but .how could I move on

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我爱你,爱的男孩和女孩之间,这种感觉太硬,让我无法相信我自己。我从未觉得这个之前,我甚至没有关系,我发誓优雅男孩以前我很敏感,这让我对感情不能帮助自己。结果是如何从我的情感,我,我想和你谈一下。我想你们每一个时间,每一天,我知道你.Wherever以来,每当…当我去了医院,我妈妈,我想念你,当我去超市的路,我想念你,当我在学习,我想念你。当我准备睡觉,我想念你。

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我爱你,爱的男孩和女孩之间,这种感觉太硬,让我无法相信我自己。我从未觉得这个之前,我甚至没有关系,我发誓优雅男孩以前我很敏感,这让我对感情不能帮助自己。结果是如何从我的情感,我,我想和你谈一下。我想你们每一个时间,每一天,我知道你.Wherever以来,每当…当我去了医院,我妈妈,我想念你,当我去超市的路,我想念你,当我在学习,我想念你。当我准备睡觉,我想念你。

人可以教我如何处理这个问题?我几乎不能呼吸。

我不知道你对我的感觉,也许只是含糊不清的,是吗?我知道你在生我的气!但我真的受超过你~ ~,我不知道该怎么办,我不知道。

“永远”这个词是如此虚幻,是的,我曾答应,我在这里为你,直到永远,但是我的感觉变了!我爱你,我爱一个男孩在电脑上,我不把你作为我的朋友,每次我跟你聊一聊,自己的心的声音:我爱你Rapheal,我想让你知道我生命中每一件事,我想要和你分享快乐,在每一个问题,为它的发生而笑。总有一天我们可以见面?我们能抓住对方一天吗?我们可以在将来结婚吗?”我的天啊!我傻啊?我常常这样想,当我们在闲聊! !

我们所能做的真相吗?事实是我们不能相见,直到永远。

亲爱的,你有你的生活,而我也一样。我告诉自己,但我的心仍然让我退化。

你是特别给我,我很高兴,因为我们我见面,但我不知道我怎么能继续……你能给我一些单词吗?什么是好的,请给我一些反应....

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追男生直接用中文吧 除非对方是老外