英语六级作文,语法疑点请帮我分析一下几句话有没有错误.1.Recently,it is in hot debate that should one expect a reward when dong a good dead?其中 it is in hot debate 中的 in hot debate做表语行不行?2.Good dead is needed

英语六级作文,语法疑点请帮我分析一下几句话有没有错误.1.Recently,it is in hot debate that should one expect a reward when dong a good dead?其中 it is in hot debate 中的 in hot debate做表语行不行?2.Good dead is needed
英语六级作文,语法疑点
请帮我分析一下几句话有没有错误.
1.Recently,it is in hot debate that should one expect a reward when dong a good dead?
其中 it is in hot debate 中的 in hot debate做表语行不行?
2.Good dead is needed to be done when is is necessary ,but not everyone is so highly moral that be willing to doing good deed when someone is in trouble.
句子中的so that 结构有没有问题?that 后跟be willing to doing 有没有错?

英语六级作文,语法疑点请帮我分析一下几句话有没有错误.1.Recently,it is in hot debate that should one expect a reward when dong a good dead?其中 it is in hot debate 中的 in hot debate做表语行不行?2.Good dead is needed
1,in hot debate 可以作表语,介词短语作表语.这句话有错误,你用了形式主语it ,真正的主语是一个从句,但是你的从句不对,首先引导词错了,从句是个问句,应该用whether ,表“是否”,其次语序不对,这种名词性从句（主语,表语,宾语从句）,语序应该是陈述语序：Recently,it is in hot debate whether one should expect a reward when dong a good dead.(注意标点符号,这不是疑问句,不用问号,你从中文角度考虑也是这样的.）
2,so that 结构没问题,但是that 后面错了,that 其实引导的是一个从句,结果状语从句,从句也必须是完整的,有主语和谓语,但是你的从句没有主语：that he or she is willing to do good deed (注意be willing to do sth )

1。 Recently, It is a hot debate whether one should expect a reward when do a good deed.
2. Good deed is what need to be done. But not every one is willing to help those in fix / trouble. （But n...

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1。 Recently, It is a hot debate whether one should expect a reward when do a good deed.
2. Good deed is what need to be done. But not every one is willing to help those in fix / trouble. （But not everyone is so moral that he is willing to do good deed when others are in trouble）
ps 个人建议，不要有意地把句子复杂化。 虽然作文中，用一些复合句会提升句子的高度，但是如果用错的反倒是适得其反的。
第一句 貌似出现了语法错误？
第二句 So + adj 或 adv +that 句子 意思为 如此。。。以至于。。。
例如 But not everyone is so moral that he is willing to do good deed when others are in trouble.

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朋友，我已经把你的句子订正好了。
1 Recently,it is under hot debate whether one should expect a reward when doing a good deed.
2 A good deed needs to be done when it is necessary, not everyone is so highly mor...

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朋友，我已经把你的句子订正好了。
1 Recently,it is under hot debate whether one should expect a reward when doing a good deed.
2 A good deed needs to be done when it is necessary, not everyone is so highly moral that he is willing to do a good deed when someone else is in trouble.
(仔细阅读，各种错误已经订正了)

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